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How to Write the Perfect Physician Assistant School Application Essay

BY Stephen Pasquini PA-C 109 Comments

How to write the perfect PA school personal statement

Over at Inside PA Training Paul wrote a wonderful blog post about the common pitfalls that many PA school applicants fall victim to while preparing their PA school essay. Common Physician Assistant Essay Pitfalls Clichés Lack of specificity Weak conclusion No theme Boring introduction This is an excellent list because eight years ago while I was applying […]

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The Physician Assistant Essay and Personal Statement Collaborative

BY Stephen Pasquini PA-C 2,289 Comments

Are you ready to get started? Choose your package, and we will begin today! Single Edit One-on-one Service Supplemental Essays Your success is our passion. (See just some of our 100’s of testimonials and comments below). We are ready to help. Our current PA school essay editing service status (): Accepting New Submissions (Photo: Me circa 1987 […]

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Do You Recognize These 7 Common Mistakes in Your Personal Statement?

BY Stephen Pasquini PA-C 6 Comments

You’ve written your essay. You know what you want to say. But will the admissions committee get your message? You’ve read through countless PA school essay samples. You’ve chopped and changed the order of the paragraphs. You’ve polished each sentence. After all that hard work, you’re still not sure whether your essay flows along nicely. Will readers […]

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7 Essays in 7 Days: PA Personal Statement Workshop: Essay 1, “A PA Changed My Life”

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7 Essays in 7 Days: PA Personal Statement Workshop: Essay 1

In this special week-long introductory session of the personal statement workshop, we are pulling essays submitted from the comments section through our free essay submission process and providing you, and our users, with a more thorough analysis of their essays. Since examples often make better teachers than words, pay close attention.  You may find just the advice […]

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PA Personal Statement Workshop: Essay 2, “I Want to Move Towards the Forefront of Patient Care”

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PA Personal Statement Workshop: Essay 2

In this second installment of my special week-long introductory session of the personal statement workshop, we are pulling essays submitted from the comments section through our free essay submission process and providing you, and our users, with a more thorough analysis of their essays. This second submission is by Justine.  It details her progression from an adolescent overcoming a […]

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PA Personal Statement Workshop: Essay 3, “She Smiled, Said “Gracias!” and Gave me a Big Hug”

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PA Personal Statement Workshop: Essay 3

In this third installment of my special week-long introductory session of the personal statement workshop, we are pulling essays submitted from the comments section through our free essay submission process and providing you, and our users, with a more detailed analysis of their essays. This third submission is by Gabe.  It details his life growing up in a […]

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PA Personal Statement Workshop: Essay 4, “I Have Gained so Much Experience by Working With Patients”

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Personal Statement Workshop Essay 4

In this fourth installment of our special week-long personal statement workshop, we continue to pull essays submitted from the comments section through our free essay submission process and provide you, and our users, with a more detailed analysis of their essays. This fourth submission is by Parn, who immigrated to the United States from Iran at […]

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PA Personal Statement Workshop: Essay 5, “Then Reach, my Son, and Lift Your People up With You”

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In this fifth installment of our special week-long personal statement workshop, we continue to pull essays submitted from the comments section through our free essay submission process and provide you, and our users, with a more thorough analysis of their essays. This fifth submission is by Jacob. It is a wonderful personal statement detailing his life […]

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PA Personal Statement Workshop: Essay 6, “That First Day in Surgery was the First Day of the Rest of my Life”

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THE PHYSICIAN ASSISTANT PERSONAL STATEMENT WORKSHOP ESSAY 6

In this sixth installment of our special week-long personal statement workshop, we continue to pull essays submitted from the comments section through our free essay submission process and provide you, and our users, with a more detailed analysis of their essays. This sixth submission is by Lindsay. It starts with a story of her time spent […]

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PA Personal Statement Workshop: Essay 7, “I Want to Take People From Dying to Living, I Want to Get Them Down From the Cliff.”

BY Stephen Pasquini PA-C 2 Comments

THE PHYSICIAN ASSISTANT PERSONAL STATEMENT WORKSHOP ESSAY 7

In this seventh (and final) installment of our special week-long personal statement workshop, we continue to pull essays submitted from the comments section through our free essay submission process and provide you, and our users, with a more detailed analysis of their essays. This seventh submission is by Jordan and is a real cliffhanger. Jordan, a […]

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Physician Assistant Personal Statement Workshop: “To say I was an accident-prone child is an understatement”

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The Physician Assistant Personal Statemeent Workshop Essay 8 - To say I was an accident-prone child is an understatement

In this latest installment of the personal statement workshop, we continue to pull essays submitted from the comments section through our free essay submission process and provide you, and our users, with a more detailed analysis of their essays. This submission is by Katie, whose life experiences combined with a traumatic injury at the age of 13, […]

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9 Simple Steps to Avoid Silly Spelling and Grammar Goofs in Your PA School Personel Statement

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9 SIMPLE STEPS TO AVOID SPELLING AND GRAMMAR GOOFS IN YOUR PHYSICIAN ASSISTANT PERSONAL STATEMENT

Did you spot my grammar goof? If not take a second look at the title. You have spent days, weeks, and months writing and perfecting your personal (not personel) statement. You have slaved countless hours in front of the computer screen trying to shed a creative light on your background and highlight your experiences. Don’t […]

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31 Physician Assistant Personal Statement Examples

31 Physician Assistant School Essay Examples and Samples

Below, are 31 PA school application essays and personal statements pulled from our FREE personal statement and essay collaborative comments section. This is an unedited sample of PA school essay submissions, meant to provide you with some insight into how other applicants are approaching their CASPA personal statements. Real World PA School Personal Statements These […]

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5 Tips to Get you Started on Your Personal Essay (and why you should do it now)

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Five Tips to Get Started on Your PA School Personal Statement

Hey, You PA School Procrastinators You know who you are — squeaking under deadlines by a nanosecond, feeling compelled to vacuum, or worse (when truly in the grips of avoidance), deciding to clean the toilet rather than tackle that pesky research paper. Believe me, as a recovering procrastinator, I can relate. Join the club When […]

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How to Write Your Physician Assistant Personal Statement The Book!

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Admissions Directors and faculty share their expectations for your PA school personal statement and we teach you how to write it!   What Makes This Book Unique? We have worked with 1000’s of applicants through our Personal Statement and Essay Collaborative and have interviewed PA school faculty and Admissions Directors from 12 top ranking PA […]

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31 Physician Assistant School Essay Examples and Samples

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How to write the perfect PA school personal statement

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