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- Are you struggling to write your physician assistant personal statement?
- Are you out of ideas, or just need a second opinion?
- Do you want an essay that expresses who you truly are and grabs the reader's attention in the required 5,000-character limit?
We are here to help perfect your PA school essay
I have written countless times on this blog about the importance of your personal statement in the PA school application process. Beyond the well-established metrics (GPA, HCE/PCE hours, requisite coursework, etc.), the personal statement is the most crucial aspect of your application.
This is your time to express yourself, show your creativity, skills, background, and make a memorable impression in seconds. This will be your only chance, so you must get it right the first time.
For some time, I had been dreaming about starting a physician assistant personal statement collaborative.
A place where PA school applicants like yourself can post your PA school essays and receive honest, constructive feedback followed by an acceptance letter to the PA school of your choice!
I have been reviewing a ton of essays recently, so many in fact that I can no longer do this on my own.
To solve this problem, I have assembled a team of professional writers, editors, and PA school admissions specilists that worked to revise and perfect my PA school application essay.
Sarah Schultz honed her writing and editing skills as a professional grant writer for nonprofit healthcare and education organizations. She gained a solid foundation in interviewing and decision-making through her role in academic admissions. A true word nerd, she holds B.A. and M.A. degrees in English Literature from Murray State University, where she was a Jesse Stuart Fellow. She is the author of seven comedic plays and had her first novel published in 2018. For the past few years, she has worked as the Team Leader for The Physician Assistant Life, where she dedicates herself to helping pre-PAs achieve their goals.
Deanna Matzen is an author with articles featured in Earth Letter, Health Beats, Northwest Science & Technology, and the Transactions of the American Fisheries Society. With an early career in environmental science, she developed a solid foundation in technical writing. Her communication skills were further honed by producing and editing content for a non-profit website, blog, and quarterly journal. Inspired to extend her craft, she obtained a certificate in literary fiction, which she draws on to build vibrant scenes that bring stories to life. Deanna loves working with pre-PAs who are on the cusp of new beginnings to find their unique story and tell it confidently.
Carly Hallman is a professional writer and editor with a B.A. in English Writing and Rhetoric (summa cum laude) from St. Edward's University in Austin, Texas. She has worked as a curriculum developer, English teacher, and study abroad coordinator in Beijing, China, where she moved in 2011. In college, she was a Gilman Scholar and worked as a staff editor for her university's academic journal. Her first novel, Year of the Goose, was published in 2015, and her first memoir is forthcoming from Little A books. Her essays and creative writing have appeared in The L.A. Review of Books, The Guardian, LitHub, and Identity Theory, among other publications.
Beth Eakman has taught college writing and worked as a professional writer and editor since the late 1990s. Her projects have involved a wide range of disciplines and media, from editing technical reports to scriptwriting for the PBS Kids show Super Why! Her writing has appeared in publications including Brain, Child Magazine, New York Family Magazine, and Austin Family Magazine. Beth lives with her family just outside Austin, Texas. She is driven to help each client tell the best version of their story and achieve their dream of becoming a physician assistant.
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We Work as a Team
Our team of professional editors is wonderful at cutting out the "fluff" that makes an essay lose focus and sets people over the 5,000-character limit. Their advice is always spot-on.
Sue, Sarah, and Carly are amazingly creative writers who will take your "ordinary" and turn it into entirely extraordinary.
I mean it when I say this service is one-of-a-kind! We have spent countless hours interviewing PA School admissions directors and faculty from across the country to find out exactly what it is they are looking for in your personal statement.
We even wrote a book about it.
To collaborate, we use Google Drive. Google Drive is free, has an intuitive interface with integrated live comments in the sidebar, the ability to have a real-time chat, to collaborate effortlessly, and compare, revise, or restore revisions on the fly. Google Drive also has an excellent mobile app that will allow you to make edits on the go!
Our team has worked with hundreds of PA school applicants within the Google Drive environment, and we have had enormous success.
The Physician Assistant Essay and Personal Statement Collaborative
I have set up two options that I hope will offer everyone a chance to participate:
- One of a kind, confidential, paid personal statement review service
- A collaborative free one (in the comments section)
Private, One-On-One Personal Statement Review Service
If you are interested in the paid service, you may choose your plan below.
The Personal Statement Review Service is:
- Behind closed doors within a private secure network using Google Drive.
- Completely interactive, meaning we will be able to provide real-time comments and corrections using the Google Drive interface.
- Telephone consultations are included with all edits above the single edit level. It’s often hard to communicate exactly what you want 100’s of miles away; for this reason, we offer the option to edit right along with us over the telephone while sharing in real-time over Google Drive. This is an option available to all our paid clients who purchase above the single edit level.
- We provide both revision and editing of all essays. What’s the difference? See below
- We will provide feedback, advice, and help with brainstorming and topic creation if you would like.
- We will help with a “final touch-up” before the big day just in case your essay needs a few minor changes.
Why Choose Our Service?
- It’s not our opinion that matters. We have gone the extra step and personally interviewed PA school administrators from across the US to find out exactly what they think makes a personal statement exceptional.
- We are a team of PAs and professional writers having worked over seven years with PA school applicants like yourself, providing countless hours of one-on-one editing and revision.
- Our clients receive interviews, and many go on to receive acceptance into their PA School of choice.
Because we always give 100%, we will open the essay collaborative for a limited number of applicants each month and then close this depending on the amount of editing that needs to be done and the time that is available.
Our goal is not quantity, but quality. We want only serious applicants, who are serious about getting into PA school.
Writing is not a tool like a piece of software, but more like how a photograph can capture your mood. It’s more like art. The process of developing a unique, memorable personal statement is time-intensive, and it takes hours to compose, edit, finalize, and personalize an essay.
As Antoinette Bosco once said:
And this is why I am charging for this service. We love helping people find stories that define their lives, and we love helping individuals who have the passion to achieve their dreams. It’s hard to describe the feeling I get when an applicant writes me back to tell me they were accepted into PA school.
There is no price tag I can place on this; it’s the feeling we get when we help another human being, it’s just like providing health care. But this takes time.
Interested? Choose your plan below.
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Free Personal Statement Review
Post your essay in the comments section for a free critique
We want to make this opportunity available to everyone who would like help with their essay, and that is why we are offering free, limited feedback on the blog.
You post your essay in the comments section, and you will get our critique. It is that easy. We will try to give feedback to every single person who posts their COMPLETE essay here on this blog post in the comments section.
Also, by posting your comment, we reserve the right to use your essay.
We will provide feedback on essays that are complete and fit the CASPA requirements (View CASPA requirements here). We will not provide feedback on partial essays, or review opening or closing statements. Your essay will be on a public platform, which has both its benefits and some obvious drawbacks. The feedback is limited, but we will try to help in any way we can.
Note: Comment Rules: Remember what Fonzie was like? Cool. That’s how we’re gonna be — cool. Critical is fine, but if you’re rude, I will delete your stuff. Otherwise, have fun, and thanks for adding to the conversation! And this should go without saying if you feel the need to plagiarize someone else’s content you do not deserve to go to PA school.
* Also, depending on the time of year it may take me several weeks to reply!
We love working with PA school applicants, but don't just take our word for it!
How to submit your essay for the paid service
If you are serious and would like to have real, focused, and personalized help writing your personal statement please choose your level of service and submit your payment below.
After you have submitted your payment, you will be redirected to the submissions page where you can send us your essay as well as any special instructions. We will contact you immediately upon receipt of your payment and essay so we may begin work right away.
Pricing is as follows:
Choose your plan then click "Buy Now" to submit your essay and we will get started right away!
Every purchase includes a FREE digital copy of our new 100-page eBook How to Write Your Physician Assistant Personal Statement, Our 101 PA School Admission Essays e-book, the expert panel audiobook, and companion workbook. This is a $65 value included for free with your purchase.
All credit card payments are processed via PayPal over a secure HTTPS server. Once your payment is processed you will be immediately redirected back to the essay submission page. There you will submit your essay along with some biographical info and all suggestions or comments you choose to provide. You will receive immediate confirmation that your essay has been securely transmitted as well as your personal copy of "How to Write Your Physician Assistant Personal Statement." Contact [email protected] if you have any questions, comments, or problems - I am available 24/7.
The hourly service includes your original edit and one-on-one time over Google Drive, it is simple to add more time if necessary, but you may be surprised at what a difference just a single edit can make. We find our four-hour service to be the most effective in terms of time for follow-up and full collaboration. We are open to reduced rate add-ons to suit your individual needs.
Writing and Revision
All writing benefits from rewriting when done well.
When you are in the process of writing a draft of an essay, you should be thinking first about revision, not editing.
What’s the difference?
Revision refers to the substantial changing of text. For example, it may include re-organizing ideas and paragraphs, providing additional examples or information, and rewriting a conclusion for clarity.
Editing, on the other hand, refers to correcting mistakes in spelling, grammar, and punctuation.
On all submissions, we perform both, revision, and editing.
How to submit your PA school essay for the FREE editing service
Follow the rules above and get to work below in the comments section. I look forward to reading all your essay submissions.
- Stephen Pasquini PA-C
View all posts in this series
- How to Write the Perfect Physician Assistant School Application Essay
- The Physician Assistant Essay and Personal Statement Collaborative
- Do You Recognize These 7 Common Mistakes in Your Personal Statement?
- 7 Essays in 7 Days: PA Personal Statement Workshop: Essay 1, “A PA Changed My Life”
- PA Personal Statement Workshop: Essay 2, “I Want to Move Towards the Forefront of Patient Care”
- PA Personal Statement Workshop: Essay 3, “She Smiled, Said “Gracias!” and Gave me a Big Hug”
- PA Personal Statement Workshop: Essay 4, “I Have Gained so Much Experience by Working With Patients”
- PA Personal Statement Workshop: Essay 5, “Then Reach, my Son, and Lift Your People up With You”
- PA Personal Statement Workshop: Essay 6, “That First Day in Surgery was the First Day of the Rest of my Life”
- PA Personal Statement Workshop: Essay 7, “I Want to Take People From Dying to Living, I Want to Get Them Down From the Cliff.”
- Physician Assistant Personal Statement Workshop: “To say I was an accident-prone child is an understatement”
- 9 Simple Steps to Avoid Silly Spelling and Grammar Goofs in Your PA School Personel Statement
- 5 Tips to Get you Started on Your Personal Essay (and why you should do it now)
- How to Write Your Physician Assistant Personal Statement The Book!
- How to Write “Physician Assistant” The Definitive PA Grammar Guide
- 101 PA School Admissions Essays: The Book!
- 5 Things I’ve Learned Going Into My Fourth Physician Assistant Application Cycle
- 7 Tips for Addressing Shortcomings in Your PA School Personal Statement
- The #1 Mistake PRE-PAs Make on Their Personal Statement
- The Ultimate PA School Personal Statement Starter Kit
- The Ultimate Guide to CASPA Character and Space Limits
- 10 Questions Every PA School Personal Statement Must Answer
- 5 PA School Essays That Got These Pre-PAs Accepted Into PA School
- 7 Questions to Ask Yourself While Writing Your PA School Personal Statement
- 101 PA School Applicants Answer: What’s Your Greatest Strength?
- 12 Secrets to Writing an Irresistible PA School Personal Statement
- 7 Rules You Must Follow While Writing Your PA School Essay
- You Have 625 Words and 2.5 Minutes to Get Into PA School: Use Them Wisely
- What’s Your #1 Personal Statement Struggle?
- 31 (NEW) CASPA PA School Personal Statement Examples
- How to Prepare for Your PA School Interview Day Essay
- Should You Write Physician Associate or Physician Assistant on Your PA School Essay?
- Meet the World’s Sexiest PA School Applicants
- PA School Reapplicants: How to Rewrite Your PA School Essay for Guaranteed Success
- How to Write a Personal Statement Intro that Readers Want to Read
- PA School Reapplicant Personal Statement Checklist
- How to Deal with Bad News in Your Personal Statement
- Inside Out: How to use Pixar’s Rules of Storytelling to Improve your PA Personal Statement
- Ratatouille: A Pixar Recipe for PA School Personal Statement Success
- Personal Statement Panel Review (Replay)
- Mind Mapping: A Tool for Personal Statements, Supplemental Essays, and Interviews
- Start at the End: Advice for your PA School Personal Statement
A one-way ticket and an 18-hour journey from Tehran to Minneapolis was my first link to the chain towards becoming a PA. Thrust into a foreign environment, I not only was forced to learn a new language but also learn unspoken customs and cultural values within the first few years of living in the States. With the help and patience of peers and teachers, I was able to find friends and learn to communicate with my classmates within months. For many people healthcare is a foreign world entirely with its own language and unspoken rules, giving potential to make it incredibly difficult to navigate for patients. As I envision myself as a PA, I reflect on my upbringing and subsequent resilience as an immigrant child, and my desire to integrate this experience into my career. Although my journey towards pursuing a PA career was seldom linear, working in healthcare as a scribe and EMT has offered me the greatest insight and clarity into my future.
The intricacies of human physiology first attracted me to working in healthcare. In undergrad, learning about the functionings of specific systems and their relation and malfunction to the development of pathophysiologies interested me the most. Eager to learn more following the downturn of the pandemic, I started working as a medical scribe at urgent care clinics. There, I met a multitude of PAs who first gave me insight into the PA profession. I was quickly in awe of medical scribing as I was thrust into the world of medical terminology, pharmacology, diagnostics, health insurance, and patient care. As a scribe, I not only honed my listening skills to carefully document every patient-provider visit but was also able to closely watch hundreds of patients being diagnosed by providers. I was attracted to the differential process the PAs went through with every patient, from the first glance at the HPI to asking the patient imperative questions that eliminate the worst of diagnoses. I found that my favorite providers were PAs from a variety of different backgrounds, who integrated their experiences from different specialties into navigating a patient’s symptoms. Furthermore, I was inspired by Dana Payne, a PA who started her journey as an EMT. Utilizing my inspiration, I coupled my desire to gain more patient contact experience and started pursuing an EMT certification.
Through this arduous journey, I keep patience and empathy close in mind with every patient interaction. Using my EMT certification, I started working in the emergency department of a level-one hospital. As I watch every trauma, sepsis, stroke, and GAP (geriatric/ anti-coagulant patient) case, I recognize the collaboration between doctors, PAs, NPs, nurses, RTs (respiratory technicians), pharmacists, and EMTs. Seamless integration, collaboration, communication, and common goals are what unite a great department together in the interest of the patient. At the ED, I see the role of the PA as they collaborate with their peers and fill in the gaps in patient care. Furthermore, I recognize that health literacy, education, and patience can help a patient navigate what is often the worst day of their lives. Often, simply introducing myself, verbalizing what I am doing, and why I am performing tasks help lessen the anxiety and ambiguity of their hospital visit.
As I hone my skills as an EMT and pursue the PA track, I reflect on my upbringing when introducing patients to the foreign environment of healthcare. I often reflect on tender moments shared with patients and loved ones when pursuing a PA career, wanting to emulate a compassionate and fulfilling role as a provider. In the place of day-to-day life, these moments fuel me to become the best person and provider I can be. Keeping my patient interactions close in mind with different job roles, I desire to integrate health literacy, transparency, and patient-collaboration into my career as a PA.
From scaling poles to navigating the intricacies of the human body, my career has been a lesson in mastering unexpected turns and uncovering hidden possibilities. My current profession as a surgical technologist at Northwestern Prentice Women’s Hospital became the first link in a chain of events that led me to discover the path I want to pursue. How I began that journey defies expectations. For about ten years, I was an AT&T technician, climbing poles, installing services, and troubleshooting issues in people’s homes. A fall from a ladder led to my layoff and plunged me into a period of despair, clouded by personal and professional setbacks. When it seemed like every door had closed, a flyer recruiting students for a surgical technology program appeared as if guided by an unseen hand. I had never heard of this career, but I knew it was in medicine—a field I had once dreamed of entering but had long given up due to early motherhood and life choices. This unexpected opportunity felt like a lifeline, a sign that I could rebuild and, importantly, that I had worth. Consequently, I began working alongside the medical professionals I aspired to become.
Transitioning from classroom knowledge to the surgical theater was anything but smooth. I remember one grueling experience where I mismatched a 10mm laparoscopic tenaculum with a 5mm sheath during a laparoscopic hysterectomy. The feeling of humiliation was overpowering, but it also ignited a fire within me. I became a student of my errors, focusing on surgical instrument sequences and fine details of various procedures like abdominal myomectomies. Now, when I train newcomers, I make sure they grasp what to expect at each stage of surgery. The joy of effectively contributing to a team that heals is beyond measure.
While I was building a rapport within my surgical team, another pivotal moment was approaching. Initially, gynecology was my favorite specialty. The prospect of advocating for women and learning more about my own physiology was alluring. However, Northwestern Prentice Women’s Hospital’s specialty focus also encompasses breast and plastic surgeries, areas I had to engage with, albeit reluctantly. During a particularly busy breast surgery case, I was thrust into the role of first assistant. With a surgeon and only one resident, I took the opportunity to demonstrate my skills. This experience solidified my aspirations.
What followed was a newfound understanding of the depth and breadth of roles within the surgical team. Witnessing a PA practically leading a surgical segment was transformative. The level of trust and responsibility surgeons gave them was an eye-opener. It wasn’t long before a PA offered to write a recommendation letter for me, and I took it as the ultimate sign. Having recently completed my bachelor’s program, I’m now focused on taking definitive steps toward becoming a PA.
I’ve come a long way from climbing poles to contemplating sutures, and every step has been a stairway toward a more fulfilling, purposeful life. My tapestry of experiences—from the heights of utility poles to the surgical theater at Northwestern Prentice Women’s Hospital—makes me uniquely positioned to serve as a PA, both technically and empathetically.
Wow! What a beautiful and inspiring story! I think this essay is just about perfect as is. The way you stepped us through your journey makes sense and, at the same time, demonstrates your knowledge of the profession and the reasoning behind your decisions to pursue this path. It demonstrates your humility and ability to adapt in high-stress situations. You have shown that you work well as part of a team. So much great stuff here! Very good. 👍