The Physician Assistant Essay and Personal Statement Collaborative

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1. Tiffany Davis says

   September 23, 2020 at 7:08 pm

   It’s ten o’clock at night, and another long day of work finally came to an end. My day began at 11:00 AM, providing treatment and rehabilitation, covering basketball, baseball, softball, cross-country practices and a volleyball game, and finally, after completing injury reports for the day, I could let out a sigh of relief. Serving as the Head Athletic Trainer (ATC) for Claflin University for four years, this was routine; however, this night was different, prompting a ball of emotions, releasing tears running down my face. Apprehension and dissatisfaction surfaced, causing me to wonder, “Is this what I will be doing for the rest of my life? If not, what else?” My love and commitment to Claflin was robust, but I reached a glass ceiling, and was burning out of fuel necessary to fulfill my responsibilities as their Athletic Trainer. I was searching for something more profound; desiring to achieve more as an individual, but even more as a healthcare provider. Then, the perfect opportunity arose for an ATC/Cast Technician for Albert Einstein Healthcare Network’s regional orthopedic office (EHN) in Philadelphia, PA. Though no casting experience, I was hired for the job, and ready to exhibit how easily I adapt to my surroundings, especially involving my passion for healthcare. The joy of practicing in a new setting stimulated a sense of achievement; yet, more importantly, my pursuit on becoming a Physician Assistant, whom should encompass empathy, determination, unwavering commitment, yet welcoming the unforeseen. As a kindhearted person who deflects the attention to others, I know my passion lies in medicine. My devotion to ease the pain of others is unconditional and sincere, yielding perseverance to construct a resolution. The anticipation of unexpected circumstances sparks exhilaration for critical thinking and planning.
   Moving out of state to Philadelphia was the change I craved that would enhance my skillset as a healthcare provider, while offering work-life balance. The routine of a traditional athletic trainer became monotonous, and after four years, my fire was slowly burning out. Philadelphia offers a range of schools for medical professionals, which was one of the main reasons for my transition to the city. I knew I wanted to return to school, it was the profession of choice that was puzzling. In search of stable work hours and exposure to various medical professionals, the clinical setting was the perfect fit, which led to a new job opportunity at EHN as an Athletic Trainer/Cast Technician. It’s valuable to work amongst other healthcare professionals and be formally linked in their unanimity. Shortly after assuming my role, I mastered casting techniques, but then desired to undertake more administrative responsibilities, leading to lateral advancement as an Athletic Trainer directly assisting a Physician Assistant. Though I love the role I assumed, I strongly desire to be “the” Physician Assistant providing care, and my professional evolution ensures I am capable of achieving that aspiration.
   Initially making a big transition to a new area and starting a new job was nerve-wracking, but soon invigorating and self-empowering, reminding myself I can accomplish any goal set before me. I conquered the climate change, established new working and personal relationships, and most significantly, revived old hobbies I could not manage while working for Claflin. The change re-energized my motivation personally, professionally, and academically. I developed a new understanding of who I am, what I aspire to become, why it aligns with me, and how I intend to make it happen. An Athletic Trainer is who I am, but I aspire to become a Physician Assistant, allowing more fluidity as a healthcare provider, further, expanding my range of specialty practice. My academic improvement and experience will make this vision a reality. As an undergraduate, academics was not my strongest, but upon attaining my Master’s in Business Administration, and excelling in recent courses, I have confidence it will not hold me back from success in PA school.
   After recollecting on my move to Philadelphia, assessing my skills as an Athletic Trainer, and honing-in on my strong characteristics, I have never been more confident that a physician assistant is who I am destined to become. Living in the City of Brotherly Love has been an unforgettable, life-changing decision that fostered personal growth as I stepped out of my comfort zone seeking self-improvement. Though saddened to leave my biological and Claflin family, I admit starting a new life and career in Philadelphia was the push I needed to achieve holistic growth. Although it may have taken some time reach this point, I am excited to take a step out on faith again and accept the new challenges before me on my journey to become a Physician Assistant. Ultimately, I have genuine appreciation for who South Carolina raised me to be, but more grateful for who Philadelphia has encouraged me to become.

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2. Gabrielle says

   September 13, 2020 at 9:54 pm

   I changed some things flowed a bit better i suppose
   It was a white winter evening in Germany full of winding curves and wet roads,
   I am on the lookout for deer when I see in the distance a shadow wagging on the side of the road. I pull off and make my way to the now squirming shadow, “can you help me?” I heard as a low groan. This was a person. When I arrive, I see his tibia and fibula at a 45-degree angle pressing against his skin. This road was a side road and it was 11 at night. There was no telling how long he had been out there, and shock was evident. He is a hit and run victim, an active duty soldier who was walking home from the local restaurant. I kept track of the young man throughout the 3 years following his accident to find he was transitioning out of the Army due to the inability to maintain his fitness. He was unable to get quality face to face time with his provider because of the ratio of patients each provider was assigned to. His pain became unbearable and he became addicted to pain medication. One of the largest disparities in America is the lack of healthcare providers.
   Even greater is the lack of women providers. As leaders in tragic cases such as sexual assault in the military the victim is provided with an escort usually a leader in their chain of authority. As a young and new supervisor, I was to accompany a victim to the hospital where she was greeted with a male provider and a female nurse. She mentioned the comfort and confidence she had with the nurse reassurances. The provider however encouraging, professional, and kind was a male. It was at that moment I decided the best way to help my brothers and sisters and by bridging the gap in healthcare becoming a physician assistant. While I am not able to serve along side them actively anymore, my passion towards education in healthcare and bridging healthcare gaps and disparities begins in the underserved who serve.
   My transcript early post-baccalaureate shows a student accepting the challenges and rigors of taking ahold of a full-time class load as a single parent. Learning how to manage my time, balance my studies, and enjoy the growth of my children is evident in my late post baccalaureate journey. While shadowing PA’s on a normal schedule was not available during my high uptempo in the military and as a single mother. I have served alongside several Army physician assistants; I have been encouraged during our encounters and motivated by their flexibility to train and maintain positive quality healthcare to our service members. I want to serve as the positive civilian support to our troops as a physician assistant to keep them proactive in managing their healthcare.
   After over 1000 hours in the military community volunteering under the spiritual roof of our installation I learned the essence of teamwork up close and personal. Everyone coming to the ministerial chapel came seeking growth in some way or another. As the Minister of Music, my position was not always music, and our Army Chaplains had more than just his or her congregation to serve. It was in that opportunity where I mentored young girls in the children’s choir and received countless advice from my elders in the adult choir. Being able to consistently develop my craft by taking in the experiences from around me made me a better woman and director. In this same environment I will thrive as a physician assistant front. The victim who needs a female provider, or the soldier who needs to see their provider sooner, has driven my ambitions to be a physician assistant

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   • Whitney Prosperi says

     September 18, 2020 at 7:09 am

     Gabrielle,
     Thank you for your service.
     Throughout your essay I can sense your passion to elevate others in significant ways.
     I think your introduction does a great job of grabbing the reader’s attention while showing your quick thinking and desire to help others.
     I would suggest adding more details about your path in healthcare. Outline any clinical skills you’ve gained that will make you a strong PA, and then describe a bit about how you connect with patients, showing empathy and educating them.
     Good luck to you.

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3. Madi says

   September 9, 2020 at 4:26 pm

   Thank you for taking the time to read over my essay!

   We’ve all been there, as a sick patient sitting in an inevitable cold room, anxious but patiently waiting on the healthcare provider to deliver our prognosis. I have experienced this on several occasions but one clinic visit in particular changed the trajectory of my life.

   “Take these antibiotics and pain medication, your urinary tract infection should start to clear up in a day or two.” I was relieved to hear this information. I had been in severe pain for 3 days and the simple instructions to rid myself of my discomfort caused me to release an audible sigh of relief. I promptly filled the prescription for the antibiotic and followed all instructions. To my dismay, the pain lingered. On day five of continuous and drastically increasing pain in my back, a trip to the ER was in order.

   To back this story up a bit, this experience took place during my senior year of college. I was living alone and it was after midnight when I decided to go to the hospital. I was concerned and quite frankly scared to know why I was still in so much pain. Upon arrival at the hospital, my vitals were taken, labs were drawn and I was placed on an IV drip. I was alone and was nervously waiting for the doctor to return. The doctor entered in the room, walked straight to my bed and said, “You have a very severe kidney infection. The medications you received at the minute clinic were not strong enough and you will need new medications to clear up the infection”. It was in that moment that I knew I wanted to work in the healthcare field. Noticing the disconnect in information from the Minute Clinic to the Hospital opened my eyes to how much disengagement there can be between healthcare options. This experience lead me to want to help others and to help change the way the medical system operates at the accessible healthcare status.

   As a minority, understanding accessible healthcare and systematic discrimination within the healthcare system was of importance and interest to me. I was raised in a medically underserved area and I would be remised to think that my situation hasn’t happened to many others. As a part of a medically underserved population, I realize that there are many people who are not as fortunate and do not receive proper medical treatment. Many people are unable to receive appropriate medical attention due to their economic, cultural or linguistic barriers surrounding the medical profession. I have vowed that I will end those barriers for as many people as possible through my pursuit of becoming a Physician’s Assistant.

   When I was a third year undergraduate student, I heard about a medical professional called a Physician Assistant (PA) through volunteering in an emergency medical service organization. I was intrigued and shocked. A medical profession that is able to support, diagnose, and treat patients that I had never heard of? My mind was blown. This type of professional is a direct correlation to my undergraduate educations and lifelong passion. Volunteering for an organization out of my sheer love for serving the community and learning about patient/healthcare led me to finding my dream career.

   Being given the opportunity to broaden my healthcare knowledge and further my education in the healthcare environment during a pandemic is a blessing. Currently, I am a patient care technician (PCT) and I have the opportunity to not only work alongside nurses, PAs and doctors, but to also submerge myself further into patient care at the surgical level. I not only witness extreme, life changing cases but I also witness how important skills, such as communication, teamwork, compassion and professionalism is in saving lives and in providing the best experience and care for patients. Working on the surgical oncology floor has led my interest for pursuing the PA career to flourish. Watching the PAs show their vast knowledge of multiple specialties has been the biggest ability of the PA career that I am impressed with. Also watching the PAs diagnose, provide treatment plans and educate the patients ensured my pursued my goal of being a PA.

   Jill, A patient I spent a lot of time assisting as a PCT, had many surgeries and required a lot of help with after care. She quickly became a patient I would never forget. Metastatic appendicle cancer, appendectomy, gastrectomy, cholecystectomy, bowel resection, and a gastrojejunostomy were among the many surgeries Ms. Jill endured. Jill not only pushed through various procedures, she also went through hard times mentally and physically due to being on many different medications, which lead to her being very confused, delirious, decrease in cognition and a physical harm to herself and others. She finally got to a point where she was able go home after 42 days in the hospital! During those 42 days of her hospital stay, Jill was so grateful for my help and always reassured me that I was doing a great job caring for her and that she was proud of my intentions to become a PA. I will never forget Jill and it is patients like her that continue to fuel my passion in the medical field.

   Patients like Jill is the sole source of why I am and have the continuous desire to work in healthcare. Assisting patients through a scary and difficult time in their life to assure they are comfortable, healing and overall feeling. Supporting and improving communities, like my own, with easily accessible, highly trained medical professionals would greatly improve and save many lives in underserved communities. I would be greatly honored if you would support my passion and dream of becoming a PA. Not only would you support my dream, you would also first handedly help this country gain a medical professional who has the drive and desire to serve their community by improving and saving the lives of many.

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   • Whitney Prosperi says

     September 18, 2020 at 7:22 am

     Madi,
     I can sense your desire to help patients woven throughout your essay.
     In your opening story, you may want to soften your tone so that it doesn’t appear you are being critical of another provider.
     Your story about Jill shows your desire to do more to help patients as a future PA.
     I would suggest condensing where you can throughout so you will have room to have a few more elements.
     First, add in what aspects of the PA profession speak to you? (more time/contact/relationship with patients? the balance of autonomous responsibility and working with a team?)
     Also, I would add in some details about any shadowing experience you have. What did you witness between PA/patient or PA/supervising physician that affirmed your desire to become a PA?
     I wish you good luck in the process.

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4. Margo Elli says

   September 8, 2020 at 6:29 pm

   We’ve all been there, as a sick patient sitting in an inevitable cold room, anxious but patiently waiting on the healthcare provider to deliver our prognosis. I have experienced this on several occasions but one clinic visit in particular changed the trajectory of my life.
   “Take these antibiotics and pain medication, your urinary tract infection should start to clear up in a day or two.” I was relieved to hear this information. I had been in severe pain for 3 days and the simple instructions to rid myself of my discomfort caused me to release an audible sigh of relief. I promptly filled the prescription for the antibiotic and followed all instructions. To my dismay, the pain lingered. On day five of continuous and drastically increasing pain in my back, a trip to the ER was in order.
   To back this story up a bit, this experience took place during my senior year of college. I was living alone and it was after midnight when I decided to go to the hospital. I was concerned and quite frankly scared to know why I was still in so much pain. Upon arrival at the hospital, my vitals were taken, labs were drawn and I was placed on an IV drip. I was alone and was nervously waiting for the doctor to return. The doctor entered in the room, walked straight to my bed and said, “You have a very severe kidney infection. The medications you received at the minute clinic were not strong enough and you will need new medications to clear up the infection”. It was in that moment that I knew I wanted to work in the healthcare field. Noticing the disconnect in information from the information given at the Minute Clinic compared to the Hospital opened my eyes to how much disengagement there can be between healthcare options. This experience lead me to want to help others and to help change the way the medical system operates at the accessible healthcare status.
   As a minority, understanding accessible healthcare and systematic discrimination within the healthcare system was of importance and interest to me. I was raised in a medically underserved area and I would be remised to think that my situation hasn’t happened to many others. As a part of a medically underserved population, I realize that there are many people who are not as fortunate and do not receive proper medical treatment, such as being able to go to both a minute clinic and a hospital, or even a hospital at all. Some people can only afford clinic options. Many people are unable to receive appropriate medical attention due to their economic, cultural or linguistic barriers surrounding the medical profession. I have vowed that I will end those barriers for as many people as possible through my pursuit of becoming a Physician’s Assistant. Becoming a PA will allow me to bridge the gap between healthcare at clinics and healthcare at hospitals. I will be able to provide a reliable resource for those who don’t always have access to a hospital but still be able to get the upmost healthcare service they deserve.
   When I was a third year undergraduate student, I heard about a medical professional called a Physician Assistant (PA) through volunteering in an emergency medical service organization. I was intrigued and shocked. A medical profession that is able to support, diagnose, and treat patients that I had never heard of? My mind was blown. This type of professional is a direct correlation to my undergraduate educations and lifelong passion. Volunteering for an organization out of my sheer love for serving the community and learning about patient/healthcare led me to finding my dream career.

   Being given the opportunity to broaden my healthcare knowledge and further my education in the healthcare environment during a pandemic is a blessing. Currently, I am a patient care technician (PCT) and I have the opportunity to not only work alongside nurses, PAs and doctors, but to also submerge myself further into patient care at the surgical level. I not only witness extreme, life changing cases but I also witness how important skills, such as communication, teamwork, compassion and professionalism is in saving lives and in providing the best experience and care for patients. Working on the surgical oncology floor has led my interest for pursuing the PA career to flourish. Watching the PAs show their vast knowledge of multiple specialties has been the biggest ability of the PA career that I am impressed with. Also watching the PAs diagnose, provide treatment plans and educate the patients ensured my pursued my goal of being a PA.
   Jill, A patient I spent a lot of time assisting as a PCT, had many surgeries and required a lot of help with after care. She quickly became a patient I would never forget. Metastatic appendicle cancer, appendectomy, gastrectomy, cholecystectomy, bowel resection, and a gastrojejunostomy were among the many surgeries Ms. Jill endured. Jill not only pushed through various procedures, she also went through hard times mentally and physically due to being on many different medications, which lead to her being very confused, delirious, decrease in cognition and a physical harm to herself and others. She finally got to a point where she was able go home after 42 days in the hospital! During those 42 days of her hospital stay, Jill was so grateful for my help and always reassured me that I was doing a great job caring for her and that she was proud of my intentions to become a PA. I will never forget Jill and it is patients like her that continue to fuel my passion in the medical field.
   Patients like Jill is the sole source of why I am and have the continuous desire to work in healthcare. Assisting patients through a scary and difficult time in their life to assure they are comfortable, healing and overall feeling. Supporting and improving communities, like my own, with easily accessible, highly trained medical professionals would greatly improve and save many lives in underserved communities. I would be greatly honored if you would support my passion and dream of becoming a PA. Not only would you support my dream, you would also first handedly help this country gain a medical professional who has the drive and desire to serve their community by improving and saving the lives of many.

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5. Jordyn says

   September 3, 2020 at 1:35 pm

   As a teenager, I struggled with obsessive compulsive behaviors that resulted from living in an environment beyond my control. Having grown up in poverty, I experienced what it was like to live on scant resources, to live in a trailer that lost power if I made toast and coffee at the same time, and to be raised by a single mother who struggled to keep food in our mouths and gas in the car. Knowing that I could not fix the situation we were in, I resulted to behaviors that awarded me the slightest comforts – folding my shirts perfectly and color-coordinating them on my shelf, rewriting my school notes because one letter stood out more than the others on the page, and obsessing over my GPA to the point that I sacrificed a social life. I became obsessed with making things perfect and developed harmful behaviors. When I graduated high school and moved in with my aunt to be closer to my college campus, I decided quickly that my life would never be the same. I obtained a job at the campus recreation center, saved up all my money, and at the age of 19, moved into my own apartment. I built a stable life, free from obsessive behaviors, that was worlds away from the one I had growing up. What would seem to a normal person as burdensome, such as washing dishes or paying bills, instead reminded me of the independence, hard work, and resilience required to get me to that point.

   I soon would become attracted to the independence, hard work, and resilience that being a physician assistant required. Despite the structure in my life throughout college, I did not have a career plan for after graduation. Knowing that I wanted to go into the medical field, I researched different healthcare professions. By the time I was a sophomore, I had decided that I was going to become a medical doctor. I frantically researched medical schools, overwhelmed with the options, and feeling as though I had no direction and was running out of time. It wasn’t until I had a conversation with a family PA during my junior year that I really connected with the profession. All of the stress that accompanied researching medical schools was replaced with confidence while researching PA schools. From then on, I lined up the experiences that I needed to introduce me to the PA profession and help me determine whether or not it was the right path for me.

   I obtained a job as a scribe for medical professionals in the ER at Adventist Health Bakersfield. I directly shadowed physicians, PAs, and FNPs during every patient encounter. I took detailed notes on the reason for the patient’s visit, the resulting treatment plan, and the outcomes of all diagnostic testing from the time the patient walked through the door, or was wheeled in on a stretcher, to the time the patient left. I saw the effects of drugs, homelessness, neglect, and the accumulation of years of terrible health decisions that consumed people before they even realized it. Anyone outside of medicine would turn away in disgust at ulcerated feet from uncontrolled diabetes, active vomiting from quitting alcohol after years of abuse, or profuse bleeding from the foot of a 6-year-old who stepped on a nail. Instead of turning away, I had the desire to help. Knowing my limitations as a scribe, I dedicated time to studying the array of health problems that I encountered, their typical symptoms, how physicians, PAs, or FNPs would treat them, and the resulting effects on the patient’s health. I absorbed the flow of the ER, the interactions between PAs and physicians during consultations, and the roles that every healthcare worker played in the treatment of disease. I determined that becoming a PA is exactly what I want to do.

   As I gained knowledge about medicine, I began to focus on my WHY. As I pursue the PA profession, why would I do it, and what would be my purpose? I could think of many benefits of being a PA – less time in education and cost compared to MD school, great job satisfaction and work-life balance, and having the flexibility to switch between specialties – but I wanted to go deeper. As I interacted with patients alongside healthcare providers, I soon could not fathom the amount of people that visited the ER who did not know much about their medical problems, who could not name the medications that they were taking, and who could not see the effects that their biology, psychology, and environment have on their health. It saddened me to see how out of touch people were with their own health. This introduced me to my WHY. To be a PA to me is to guide people toward becoming in touch with their health – to understand their diseases, how taking medication can influence their outcomes, and how they can have power over those outcomes. To truly understand the effects of their lifestyle on their well-being. Just as I realized that I had the power to overcome poverty and my obsessive behaviors, I hope to help others realize that they have the power to live a healthier life. I will accomplish this end as a PA.

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   • Whitney Prosperi says

     September 9, 2020 at 10:44 am

     Jordyn,
     You are off to a good start!
     I would suggest elaborating on your shadowing experience. What about the interactions you witnessed (between PA/patient or PA/supervising physician) confirmed your desire to become a PA?
     I would also explain some of your clinical skills/knowledge you’ve gained in your current role and emphasize your desire to collaborate with a healthcare team.
     Reinforce your desire to combine your clinical expertise with a personal touch to support patients. You want to show what you have to offer as a future PA.
     Good luck to you!

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6. Nishat Nahar says

   September 2, 2020 at 3:54 am

   ‘‘Life is like a zebra full of white and black stripes. When you find yourself on a white stripe, walk slowly and enjoy it because it represents all that is positive in life. But when you come to a black stripe, or a time of turmoil and pain, raise your collar, shut your eyes, and ran as fast as you can. Remember, there’s always a white stripe on the other side.’’ My grandma always told me that. She wanted me to grow up to become a woman with a strong personality who knows what the real world is like. But she wasn’t holding me back anymore; January 29, 2009 was a day I would remember for the rest of my life. My day started with the muffled sounds of the phone ringing at 3:00 A.M. I remember asking myself, why would someone call that early? – My heartbeat was going so fast and I had a strange feeling. I walked into my parent’s room; it was filled with sadness and the air was thick. “Your grandma passed away”, my mom said as her eyes got glassy. As we arrive at the hospital, I felt heavy, and the elevator ride felt like a decade. As soon as I stepped my foot into the room, all the emotion rushed out of me and I started crying. I found out that she passed away due to a wrong diagnosis from her doctor which became a great obstacle in my life. Her death due to negligence of a doctor inspired me more to become a Physician Assistant; because in my country there is no such professional as Physician Assistant who will help the doctor to come up with a great decision for the patient’s treatment. Those circumstances kept me going when my family migrated from Bangladesh to America and helped me to become the person I am today.

   As a Muslim teenage girl, it was very challenging for me learning American culture, being that it is so distinct from mine. As time passed, I discovered myself interested in math and science from my high school teachers and students. I set my mind on doing my best in school, so I could achieve my goal of becoming a Physician Assistant. However, one major barrier was English. As I grew up as a scholar student of Bangla Academy, I was not quite well at English. On the first day at school, I took the state English exam for immigrant students; my score was not as high as. But second time, I earned a perfect score in the state English exam which put me first out of almost 500 students. I tried hard to work and never gave up on my English barrier. It was then that I entered the Pre-Med program at my school, in which I enrolled in several AP classes, signed up as a lab monitor, and I also began volunteering at the New York-Presbyterian Hospital until now. These experiences solidified my desire to pursue a career in medicine at Hunter college. Currently, I am a senior in the Human Biology honors major with a 3.70 GPA and the upper-level biology courses are inspiring me more towards my career. I firmly believe that I will be very successful in the medical field. It will bring me the most profound sense of joy helping those in need.

   Volunteering and Interning as a CNA at a Nursing home shapes my perspective because it makes me feel like I am making a difference in the world. Helping out the nurses and the patient’s makes me feel strong and connecting with the patient’s brings me one step closer to my goal, which is to make an impact in the world. I remember my grandmother’s words and her misfortune death every day motivates me to reach my goal of becoming a Physician Assistant. Volunteering shows me that materialistic items don’t make me as happy as talking and interacting with patients. From the outside they are just patients, but once you get to know them, each and every person has their own incredible story to tell. Sitting and talking to the patient’s makes a huge impact in their treatment because they won’t feel alone in their health journey. Each week I’m always looking forward to going back and meeting new patients and old and catching up with the nurses. Volunteering does not feel like a job to me, it feels like responsibility. I am very lucky to be healthy and well, therefore it is my responsibility to take care of those who are not as fortunate as I am. For this reason, I chose this prestigious Physician Assistant program to make a strong grip towards my career and underserved people in my community.

   My English professor once told me, “Believe in yourself and all that you are. The biggest obstacle you will ever have to overcome is your mind. If you can overcome that, you can overcome anything” which gives me deeper understanding behind the word “Zebra”, which my grandma always talked about. As human beings, we all have our ups and downs. But the more I mature, I have come to an understanding of how valuable certain matters are: namely, that we should all be treated with equality and respect, particularly when it comes to the one thing, we cannot put a price tag on our health. The people in the medical field that I have encountered serve to fuel my desire to reach what I consider the noblest of careers.

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   • Whitney Prosperi says

     September 9, 2020 at 10:21 am

     Nishat,
     I am so sorry for the loss of your grandmother. She sounds like she was such a wise woman and that her life shaped the direction yours would take.
     I would suggest you consider softening your language about the mismanagement of her diagnosis so that it doesn’t appear you are being critical of another provider.
     I would also elaborate on what aspects of the PA profession speak to you. Is it the ability to have more time to connect with patients/develop relationships? The ability to switch specialties? Balance of autonomous responsibility and working with a healthcare team?
     I would also add a paragraph about any shadowing experiences you may have had. What did you admire about the interactions the PA had with patients? The supervising physician? How did this confirm your desire to become a PA?
     Also, add a few lines that connect your strengths, your interest in caring for patients directly, and why you will excel at combining clinical expertise with a personal touch to support patients. You want to show why you are suited for the PA profession.
     I would also add a patient care story that shows you in action caring for a patient that motivated you to do more for patients.
     You will likely need to condense where you can so you can add in the suggested elements. I’m not saying you need this, but should you want further help, we are taking essay submissions for our revision service.
     Good luck to you, Nishat.

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7. Claire A Leveck says

   September 1, 2020 at 10:33 pm

   As my medical squad and I approached the bunker, we came upon a wounded soldier in the mud. While this was a simulation experience, I recognized the urgency of the situation. We found a gushing leg wound. I immediately applied a tourniquet, which saved my patient’s life. This army training experience solidified my decision to become a physician assistant (PA). It highlighted my critical thinking skills to produce direct action, my strength in communication, and efficient performance in a leadership role of a collaborative medical team.

   I also solidified my desire to become a PA while serving as a lab teaching assistant. It showed me that I have a strength in explaining complex concepts in a simple way that people understand. By prioritizing education and collaboration, I can empower my patients to maintain a sense of autonomy and control in making educated health care decisions. I can also communicate effectively with my colleagues to provide excellent care.

   Throughout my education, I was excited by studying the integration of concepts from a vast variety of disciplines in medicine. The integrated nature fueled my interest to continue studying how I could apply these concepts as a PA. I was stimulated by collaborative topics such as malaria, the complexity of social determinants of health, and studying intricate processes such as electrical stimuli igniting a heart beat.

   I struggled in my performance in a few courses while pursuing my degree, but I challenged myself and ultimately succeeded in improving my performance through perseverance and determination. I consistently attended professor and teaching assistant sessions. Through these challenges, I solidified my knowledge, strengthened my mental resilience, and triumphed.

   Physician assistants require a mindset of flexibility and teamwork to fill the evolving needs of their patients and coworkers. Through my experience shadowing Diane Siem, PA-C at UW Medical Center, I noted that she supported her colleague by sharing her patient load to accommodate for additional time spent with one patient. The quality of being flexible contributes towards providing holistic care. During my shadowing experience, I also observed how Diane discussed chemotherapy and other treatment options with her patient and actively listened to their concerns to help prioritize the patient’s needs. I am interested in providing holistic medicine by presenting the whole scope of a patient’s condition and identifying a treatment plan as a team by guiding them through their choices.

   I will prioritize preventative care in my future PA practice, when appropriate. My top priority as a future PA is to preserve my patients’ highest quality of life while effectively utilizing resources and balancing the art and science of medicine. I plan to work together with my patient and additional providers to support my patient in preventing further escalation of their condition and prevent its impact on their life.

   As a current nursing assistant at Seattle Children’s Hospital, I utilize critical thinking skills to meet the changing needs of the patients and department. I prioritize tasks effectively to offer excellent and efficient care. I collaborate with the bedside nurses and other providers by notifying them of abnormal patient symptoms. I think in the moment to quickly solve problems and provide assistance to resolve patient or family concerns and ensure that the patient feels supported. Through my nursing assistant experiences, I have recognized that working in a team allows me to perform to my personal best by challenging my perspective and opening my mind up to new ideas.

   I will succeed in serving as part of the interdisciplinary care team as a PA by collaborating with other providers while focusing on the patient. I will continue to prioritize being an advocate for my patient and I will continue to implement this priority when I practice as a PA. I utilize active listening and validation of the patients’ concerns, prompt action and follow up. This displays my strength for recognizing the holistic needs of patients. Each day, I come into work with the mindset that I have a new opportunity to learn and improve my skills while providing for my patients. I look forward to receiving a diverse patient load with varying physical and emotional needs.

   My overall goals are to care for patients by providing excellent clinical care, focusing on holistic medicine, patient education, and guiding my patients. I plan to achieve my goals through my effectiveness as a team leader and collaborator, prioritization of tasks, and serving my patients with a mindset to learn every day. My patients and colleagues would benefit from what I consider my strengths in critical thinking, problem solving and responding under stressful conditions. My patient, our team, and I will work together to progress towards protecting their highest quality of life. I will serve as the patient’s advocate along the way.

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   • Whitney Prosperi says

     September 9, 2020 at 10:00 am

     Claire,
     You do a good job of capturing the reader’s attention in your opening.
     I also think you effectively show your desire to collaborate with a healthcare team.
     Your paragraph about your shadowing experience was also effective.
     I would suggest moving the paragraph that discusses your grades to the paragraph before your conclusion. This allows you to set up the positive aspects of your experience first, plus this is where schools expect to see this information.
     I would suggest condensing your essay word by word so you can add a patient care story in that shows you in action providing clinical care of some kind. You want to show your desire to do more for patients. Describe how you connected with a patient on a personal level. You want to show what you have to offer as a future PA.
     Good luck to you!

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8. Alexis says

   August 28, 2020 at 8:24 pm

   On one horribly snowy night, rushing to get to Canada from New York City for my grandmother, we found out that she had to have her brain tumor removed. The trip was a total of eight hours long and I remember the franticness of getting to our destination, which inevitably was the fear of the unknown. As we arrived at the hospital I was overcome with a sense of nervousness and eagerness to see her as I was only a child. I began to wonder if she was going to be okay and if the doctors can help her. I began to think of all that I’ve experienced observing many people in the hospital and offices with different professions that were able to help my family members that have undergone procedures ranging from triple bypass heart surgery to my grandmother’s brain tumor. I came across this at such a young age and I appreciated the help of everyone, and I grew up wanting to help people the way they helped my family members. Thankfully, the surgery went well and we found out that the tumor was benign.

   That one snowy night gave me perspective into paving my path into wanting to go into the medical field. The special interaction with a PA that night, what I’ve witnessed at a young age, and eventually having a job that requires patient interaction gave me the motivation to want to be the change in this world. Due to recent events, such as the Covid-19 pandemic I realized how appreciated health care workers are and the qualities that they possess, for example, their humility and patience that it takes being under pressure during certain high-risk situations. The Covid-19 pandemic was unknown and never experienced before.

   Having family members in the hospital as both essential workers and patients shaped my mindset. As I got older I realized that the exchanges between the health professionals and I guided me to wanting to become a PA. As I observed how they helped my grandmother and family members I began to wonder if my impact would have the same effect. That night my grandmother was admitted to surgery a PA helped to reassure me that she was strong and would do great. As I got older, I realized and appreciated the gritty and compassionate side of medicine; it inspired me to want to help others and better my community to encourage others to feel the same compassion I did.

   I have also learned a lot of lessons throughout my health/patient care experience in that everyone has a different mindset when walking into a hospital or doctor’s office. Some have genuine fears and it is our job as health care professionals to be patient and help ease any of their concerns. As I stated before, my fear was not knowing how my grandmother was doing in surgery. Patients and family members have fears of medicine. In acknowledging this I obtained a job to become a dental assistant this past summer. One memorable moment was this child that was scared to get a filling at the dentist and I reassured him that everything would be okay I explained the procedure and all of the instruments that were going to be used. I even put on Netflix for him so that he would be occupied while the procedure in process. In our viewpoint it was a small filling, but it was a big moment for him. Being able to reassure him and calm him down is what motivates me to become a PA, I felt the same way he did when my grandmother was in the hospital and having numerous health care worker interaction made me feel as though everything would be okay. This interaction along with many others challenged me to develop and learn several skills. It made me work under stressful situations such as tooth extractions or even taking x-rays, which was uncomfortable to some people. For them to be comfortable it forced me to reassure them that everything would be fine, and I can help make it less difficult. Patients came in with various complications that sometimes led to difficult procedures sometimes lasting over an hour. They are often stressed out about it and irritable. My goal was to empathize and understand what they were going through no matter what.

   While working with patients from my past experiences in a hospital to now in a dental office, I found it important to collaborate with my coworkers and make sure we all work together to create a safe space for these patients. During my work in volunteering along with my recent ventures, I appreciate each opportunity I had with all of my peers and educators that guided me into the PA path. With my memorable moments and many more to come, I feel as though I am ready to start my path to becoming a PA. I have faced some difficulties during undergrad due to adjusting to a different environment my first two years but that has motivated me even more to continuing my education and gaining more experience. I know there will be many more obstacles, but with everything I have overcome so far, my fear of the unknown has been diminished as I have a more positive outlook due to my patient interactions and ongoing support.

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   • Whitney Prosperi says

     August 31, 2020 at 9:31 am

     Alexis,
     I would suggest elaborating on the story about the PA who calmed you before your grandmother’s surgery. This will make for a strong introduction and show your introduction to the PA profession. What about that PA calmed your nerves? Describe some more of that interaction.
     I would also add a paragraph that details what about the PA profession appeals to you. Is it the ability to switch specialties? More time/contact with patients? The balance between working with a healthcare team and autonomous responsibility?
     I would also write a paragraph that describes your shadowing experiences. What about the PA reinforced your desire to pursue the profession? Elaborate on an interaction between patient/PA or physician/PA.
     I would detail more of your path in healthcare. What are some of the clinical skills you’ve gained that will make you a strong PA? Also, describe how you connect with patients as you show empathy and educate them. We need to see what you have to offer as a future PA and how you perform your duties.
     You are wise to mention your collaboration with your team as this is such an integral part of the PA’s role.
     If you have grade issues you need to discuss, devote a short paragraph to that (paragraph before your conclusion) that explains what happened that resulted in lower grades and any improvement your made and how you’ll continue that trend in a rigorous PA program.
     For your conclusion, reiterate your desire to care for patients directly and have increased clinical responsibility in their care. I would also tie back to that initial introduction to the PA in some way here.
     Good luck to you on your journey!

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9. Kerri Marie says

   August 28, 2020 at 5:49 am

   I made a silent vow; it was during the second semester of college and I was about to embark on my first clinical as a Physical Therapy Assistant. I was an eager student who wanted to do anything that was asked of me and jump at every opportunity my clinical sites offered. We were coached and rehearsed and … ready? Yes, I was ready. I had shopped for the appropriate clothes, reconciled that sneakers with khakis and a polo would be my uniform. My anatomy clip board was prepped with an insane amount of paper, my goniometer was labeled and calibrated. I looked the part, but I was petrified of one thing. My vow, kept close to my chest, never spoken of until now… was the fact that I wouldn’t- just don’t ask me to- touch an amputated leg. I would be alright if I didn’t have to work with a new amputee. With a poor understanding and never having seen one in person before, I felt like it was incredibly painful, and if I’m being completely honest, weird. Anxiety and fear got the better of me. That silent vow is also my private joke. Life is full of ironies and this was no different.
   I graduated from college managing to avoid any amputees during my clinicals, but within the first month of work it happened. The name went up on the admission board and the Admission Coordinator was describing the most horrific car accident to the Physiatrist. I overheard words like “traumatic”, “degloving”, “above knee, below knee on the other”, and did I hear the word “guillotine”? Why on earth was I hearing the word “guillotine” in the healthcare setting?
   I had allowed myself the luxury of thinking she would never show up on my caseload, but there was no avoiding this patient. My supervising PT put her on my schedule the very next day. According to her, I would probably be better suited since I grew up on a farm and saw this kind of “stuff”. I wanted to argue that owning horses was hardly a farm, but something inside told me resistance was futile. When I walked into her room for the first time, she looked at me without looking at me. She had been through so much and had met so many people, I was no different. She was numb; not angry, not resentful, her brain had allowed her to forget most of the accident. She knew enough to know her condition was grave and yet she had made it to rehab, man-handled and in pain. Nurses were attempting to adhere another wound vac dressing that kept leaking. The room was hot with a single fan trying to push around heavy, iodine laden air, but it wasn’t succeeding. Her drainage was copious.
   My reaction was surprising. After all that anticipation, it was anti-climactic. The anxiety I had built suddenly disappeared, melted into thin air, I could no longer access the panicky feeling of trepidation I had just moments ago felt. For the next 45 minutes I held her leg to alleviate the RN’s burden and spoke to her. It wasn’t Physical Therapy, but it was needed in that moment. Two days later I was in a gown and gloves showing the per diem RN how to pack an amputated leg that was not sutured shut. Three months later she was wheelchair independent and her wounds were slowly healing, she called me her “girl” and we ended up having a powerful impact on one another. Every residual limb since then has been beautiful and I’ve never thought twice about touching, wrapping, stretching, desensitizing or applying a prosthesis. The lesson I took was twofold- your patients aren’t a diagnosis and anxiety is useless.
   I have worked hands on for the past 20 years as a PTA. Physical Therapy has been a great fit for me. I believe in the work I do, and I took opportunities to become a better therapist through certifications. As an Assistant, I’ve grown as much as I can within the field but have an ambition to do more. Being part of a healthcare team, I can confidently approach this application process with an understanding of the demands of being a Physician’s Assistant. This, along with the robust scholarship opportunities within the Veterans Administration has prompted my desire to advance my career. At no other point in my life have I been more prepared for this journey.

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   • Whitney Prosperi says

     August 31, 2020 at 9:09 am

     Kerri,
     I can sense your passion for patient care woven throughout your essay.
     Your introduction is powerful, but I think you will need to condense it where you can so you can allow room for additional parts of your journey to round out your essay. (To punch up the drama, you may consider opening with the amputee story more directly.)
     I would add a paragraph that details more about why the PA profession is right for you. What first drew you to the profession? What aspects of it really speak to you? (e.g., the potential for more time/contact with patients? the balance between autonomous responsibility for patients and working with a physician and other members of a team?) Detail why you chose the PA profession and why it’s a good fit for you.
     I would also add a paragraph that describes your shadowing experiences. What did you learn from observing this PA? The physician? What did you admire about the interactions the PA had with patients and the supervising physician? How did this experience affect you interest in the profession?
     It would also be a good idea for you to describe your path in healthcare, including your current role. Please outline the clinical skills you’ve gained that will make you a strong PA, and then describe a bit about how you connect with patients, showing them empathy and educating them, etc., while caring for them clinically. We also need to see more of what motivates you to do more for them as a future PA.
     For your conclusion, I would reiterate your desire for increased time with patients and advanced responsibility and clinical knowledge to intervene in their care.
     If you should need further help, remember we are taking submissions for our essay revision service.
     Good luck to you, Kerri!

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10. Rachel says

    August 26, 2020 at 9:52 am

    There are two sides to healing: physical and emotional. Healthcare workers are some of the few individuals who have the ability to do both. We are the ones on the front lines fighting to save lives and constantly seeing so much pain but are the ones who choose to take responsibility to heal that pain. While we are healing others’ wounds, we are simultaneously healing ourselves. I wanted to be a part of that healing. Over time, the path I have walked ingrained within me a passion for providing the highest quality of care for my patients.

    Watching Arnold, an orthopedic physician assistant (PA), in surgery, was an unforgettable experience. As we prepared, I was immediately taken back to when my arm was sutured after being bitten by a dog and reminded of the fascination I had as my skin was reunited by a single piece of string. The recollection of images of my blood streaming down my arm, my parents frantically trying to communicate with what little knowledge of the English language they had, and me dumbfounded at the situation and shock of what happened, unable to get even a bit of reassurance that everything would be alright. The event, so deeply rooted within me, sparked my curiosity of how I, not as a patient but a medical professional, would act to alleviate the pain of a family so desperate for help. The passion to partake in surgery, the ability to help and comfort those in medical need while expanding my own knowledge was gained from that moment. The memory was gone in a flash, and all I wanted to do was to stand where Arnold was and take part in the harmonious teamwork that was being performed before me.

    My dad’s selfless nature taught me that sometimes offering empathy, sympathy, and a listening ear was more than enough. I remember the moment when the silent five-year-old girl I spent weeks with in Ensenada finally felt comfortable enough to sit on my lap and smile. She had been broken by the very people who were supposed to keep her safe and I was determined to piece her back by offering her something she never received: warmth. The once distant girl I sat on the beach and talked with shocked me as she sat in my lap and hugged me. We were separated by an entirely different language and culture, but healing a person with sincerity, proved it had no boundaries. I realized that the warmth I offered acted as an emotional band-aid to heal and help the girl to be able to trust again.

    At first, I did not know what I wanted to do in healthcare, but after exposing myself to new experiences and my own life journey, I knew that I wanted to provide physical and emotional healing. Summer Health Professions Education Program (SHPEP) at UCLA, is a summer medical program focused on providing healthcare to medically disadvantaged communities. During a conversation with Dennis, my program mentor, I expressed my interest in providing holistic care and wanting to help patients heal both in mind and body. I wanted to collaborate with professionals across all specialties to develop treatment plans for patients. I hoped to form relationships with patients, have the autonomy to diagnose, and be directly part of the team responsible for a patient’s care plan. Dennis responded with just two words, “physician assistant.” After listening to Dennis explain, I knew this was it. Dennis was finally able to put a name on what I have wanted to do.

    Working as a medical assistant at an internal medicine clinic has allowed me to develop my collaboration and communication skills. At the clinic, my team focused on providing the best care for our patients by arranging treatment between our doctors and other providers to prepare their bodies for the fight. Although our jobs are to physically heal the patients, we are also responsible for providing emotional care and support during some of their most vulnerable moments. I serve as a link between my doctors and patients to relay concerns while building a relationship and trust with both. While working in this clinic, I have received valuable insight into how a PA, as a mid-level practitioner, can serve as a bridge between the patient and doctor, and how serving as a bridge produced a range of emotions in our patients. For some, it is heartbreak and sorrow; for others, it is happiness and joy.

    From a young age, I witnessed the importance of emotional and physical healing; moving forward, I want to combine both. Being a PA continuously gives me the opportunity to learn and experience new specialties and strengthen my medical knowledge so that I can be an asset wherever I am.This role allows me to combine my various interests such as my desire to constantly develop my skill sets, work seamlessly within a medical team, and gain the ability to help diagnose and develop treatment plans for patients. I am confident that my experiences have brought me to where my passions, capabilities, and purpose intersect as to be a future physician assistant.

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    • Whitney Prosperi says

      August 26, 2020 at 2:34 pm

      Rachel,
      You are off to a great start! There are many strong elements in your essay, including the description of meeting Arnold and the section about what speaks to you about the PA profession.
      You also do a good job in your conclusion.
      I would add a description of any shadowing experience you have. What did you witness that confirmed your decision to become a PA? Describe the interaction between PA/patient or PA/supervising physician.
      Good luck to you, Rachel!

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11. Kayla says

    August 20, 2020 at 9:53 pm

    On the outside, Sarah had it all: a beautiful home, a fulfilling job, and a great family whom everyone in the community adored. When she first came into the psychiatric clinic where I worked as a scribe on a hot summer afternoon in 2019, her shoulders were hunched over, her head was turned downward, and her eyes were filled with tears. I introduced myself during her intake process and she asked, “Kayla, why am I so sad and discontent all the time? I try to be happy for my family, but I cannot do it alone anymore.” My heart went out to Sarah, but I was unable to answer her question other than telling her it would be alright. After her encounter with the psychiatrist, Sarah was diagnosed with Bipolar Disorder, Type II and Generalized Anxiety Disorder. While stunned initially, she understood and accepted her diagnoses.

    Sarah was started on a medication regimen which worked very well for her from the beginning. As she returned each month for her follow up appointments, it was evident she had found more happiness in her life. It was during my encounters with Sarah where I realized I wanted to eventually be able to diagnose and treat patients like her. When patients asked me why they were experiencing physical/mental issues, I wanted to have an answer and to help them find the solution.

    Although I was technically a scribe, my responsibilities included triaging patients independently from the physician along with documenting patient encounters. This allowed me to become very close with Sarah, along with all other patients. I was able to know their families and discuss their careers with them, along with other aspects of their lives. Patients would tell me they felt as though their voices were heard when they spoke with me because I was able to acknowledge their issues and sympathize with them. It is such an honor to gain a patient’s trust and have them share details of their lives they would not share with anyone else.

    It was during a conversation with a close work colleague where the PA profession was introduced to me. She told me a former high school classmate had started her career as a PA and she enjoyed it immensely. After extensive research, it was evident the PA profession was something I wanted to pursue. I immediately enrolled in night classes to complete all prerequisites for PA programs while working full-time. Although challenging at times, I knew the end result would be a fulfilling career where I would finally be able to deliver quality patient care in underserved areas.

    Growing up in one of the poorest counties located in one of the poorest states in the nation, I realized at a very young age how difficult it is for a majority of individuals in rural areas to access adequate medical care. Since PAs are able to order labs/advanced imaging, prescribe medication, and diagnose, I believe they are essential in closing the gap between the increased need for medical care in rural areas and the shortage of physicians regardless of specialty. The versatility of PAs is what makes them unique from other healthcare professions, and this is a driving factor as to why I am pursuing this profession. Teamwork and exceptional communication skills are essential in becoming a PA and this is something I pride myself in. During my time as a medical scribe at a psychiatric clinic, I was able to collect information from the patient and relay anything of importance to the physician prior to their encounter. I enjoy working as a member of a healthcare team because everyone has their own unique role in order to achieve one common goal: quality patient care. From the scribe, to the RN, to the PA, and to the physician, each individual has a purpose.

    I would like to be honest and forthcoming when you have a glimpse at my transcript. During the spring semester of my junior year, I had a difficult time adjusting to the academic demands of the course work and managing my time. Also during this time, my grandmother’s health started to decline rapidly, and she was diagnosed with vascular dementia. I had difficulty putting that aside in order to focus on my studies and as a result, I performed very poorly. I did not “fail” anything, but I am well aware multiple Cs in science coursework does not work in my favor. As you can see during my senior year, my grades began to show an upward trend as I learned to prioritize things and allow my family to care for my grandmother while I lived in Oxford full time. I have made As in all my courses after undergrad and I hope an upward trend is noted.

    From my first encounter with Sarah, I knew my life would not be same as it was previously. My encounters with her gave me a passion for helping others and giving them the answers they are looking for. There is nothing more rewarding than to witness someone’s progress after experiencing one of their lowest times. Along with developing a trusting relationship with patients, I believe this is what being a PA is all about. I look forward to a future where I am able to help people like Sarah have a better quality of life and find their own happiness.

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    • Whitney Prosperi says

      August 24, 2020 at 1:02 pm

      Kayla,
      I can sense your desire to help patients woven throughout your essay. Your introduction (as well as conclusion) shows that.
      You also do a good job of showing the reasons why you are drawn to the PA profession.
      If you have any shadowing experience, I would describe an interaction between PA/patient or PA/supervising physician. If you don’t have shadowing experience, this could be from observing a PA you have worked with. What did you admire from these interactions that confirmed your desire to become a PA?
      I would add a few lines that connect your strengths, interest for caring for patients directly, and why you will excel at combining clinical expertise with a personal touch to support patients.
      Good luck to you!

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12. megan says

    August 19, 2020 at 9:40 am

    What was a normal day quickly changed all due to one phone call. I was a fifth grader, looking into the rear-view mirror from the backseat when my mom’s phone rang. I watched a tear roll down her face as she listened to the person speaking. Later that evening, my mother told me that she had been diagnosed with melanoma. Fortunately, it was caught at an early stage and my mom was cured after one surgery. Although I was young, from doing my own research and attending doctor appointments with my mother, this experience was the seed that initiated my interest in medicine.
    That seed only grew as I got older when my uncle Louie began losing his battle to liver cancer. During my junior year of high school, he moved in with my mother and I and was eventually placed on hospice care. I would watch as the hospice nurse came throughout the week to provide medical care and emotional support. Through this, I learned the true meaning of compassion and knew that I wanted to spend my life helping others just as past medical professionals helped my family. My uncle’s unfortunate death only fueled my determination to pursue a career in medicine. I immersed myself in researching different medical professions when I came across a career as a physician assistant (PA). By becoming involved in different organizations, volunteering, shadowing, and working in a healthcare setting, I learned that various qualities within myself aligned with those of a PA.
    I began shadowing a PA, Micah Lust, the summer before my junior year of college. Micah specializes in geriatric family medicine, and through shadowing, I gained valuable knowledge regarding the role of a PA. I was intrigued by how she worked independently as well as collaborated with other health professionals to provide quality care for her patients. Most of all, I was captivated by the amount of time she spent directly assessing and interacting with patients; a quality that I am looking for in my own professional career. In addition to these two aspects, I also observed admirable characteristics such as compassion, integrity, and her ability to be reliable for both her patients and co-workers. These are characteristics that I possess and have further developed through working in a healthcare setting.
    I have been exposed to diverse medical circumstances while working as a medical scribe and as a geriatric caregiver over the past two years. As a medical scribe, I worked in both adult and pediatric emergency departments. Working in such a fast-paced environment instilled the importance of communication and organization to provide exceptional team-based care. I used my job as a medical scribe to not only help physicians and PAs complete all medical documentation, but also as an opportunity to learn their perspectives in overall medical decision making. I challenged myself to learn medications, diagnoses, and closely observed how each medical professional interacted with various patients.
    Working as a geriatric caregiver taught me firsthand what it takes to support clients with various medical issues. I was directly responsible for administering medications and paying close attention to any acute changes that could be a sign for further medical evaluation. Through caregiving, I utilized my abilities to be empathetic and attentive; important skills that I have acquired through shadowing a PA and working as a medical scribe. Caregiving was a wholesome experience that allowed me to touch the lives of my clients and their loved ones, while further developing skills that I have observed a PA must exhibit. I enjoyed learning different aspects of each specialty that I was exposed to while working as a medical scribe and caregiver. With such a broad interest in multiple medical specialties, I favor the lateral mobility that the PA profession offers.
    I was always aware that academics are crucial when becoming a PA. During undergrad, I lost four significant family members all in a span of one and a half years. Grief overcame me in what seemed to be a cascade of death during that time. I found myself losing ambition, which unfortunately, was reflected in my grades during my junior and part of my senior year. I soon realized that I could not proceed depriving myself of a goal that I had been working so hard for. I decided to take-action and began believing in myself again; knowing that the loved ones I had lost would be proud. The last semester of my senior year I worked hard to bring my grades back up and became a first-generation graduate.
    I am grateful for the obstacles that I have faced. I have learned from my mistakes and became a stronger woman than I ever thought I could be. Becoming a PA would allow me to apply all the skills that I have acquired through shadowing and my work experience to leave a positive impact on others’ healthcare experience. The knowledge that I have gained through all my experiences only confirmed my passion and ambition to become a remarkable physician assistant.

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    • Whitney Prosperi says

      August 24, 2020 at 12:51 pm

      Megan,
      Your introduction does a good job of showing your early interest in medicine and helping others.
      Your section on shadowing is strong.
      I would include a patient care story from your work as a geriatric caregiver. Show yourself in action performing clinical care of some kind while connecting with a patient on a personal level. You want to show what you have to offer as a future PA and how you perform your duties.
      You do a good job of addressing your grades. If you applied any study techniques or time management skills, briefly mention those.
      In your conclusion, I would tie back to your introduction in some way. I would also reiterate your desire to directly care for patients and have advanced responsibility for their care.
      I’m not saying you need this, but should you need further help, we are taking submissions for our essay revision service.
      Good luck to you!

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13. Michaela says

    August 18, 2020 at 3:27 pm

    The spring that I broke my right wrist and was told by one of my professors to “learn how to write with my left hand”, in order to take my exams, is the same semester I was taking my hardest physiology and kinesiology classes. In addition, I lost my grandmother. It is also the same semester that I was promoted at my part-time job, remained an active member of my sorority, won an intramural championship, and received a 4.0 GPA and a spot on the Dean’s List. It’s was after that treacherous semester that I finally admitted to myself that I could do just about anything as long as I continued to work hard. After many visits with my hand and wrist Physician’s Assistant, I realized my extreme passion to become one myself.
    My interest in the human body began when I took an elective class in high school called Human Physiology and Anatomy (HPA). It led to the declaration of Biology as my major for my first year at Colorado State University. When I began desiring more anatomy driven courses rather than biology, I changed my major to Health and Exercise Science where I could take physiology, microbiology, kinesiology, biomechanics, nutrition, and anatomy. One of the most amazing classes I was able to enroll in was a cadaver lab. Identifying muscles, nerves, arteries, and veins by holding these structures in my hand was the ultimate way for me to learn.
    I took classes like Theory of Health Behavior and Population Health and Disease Prevention which aided in the interest of not just physical structures of the human body but the mental and emotional structures also. I studied the adversity that some populations and cultures are faced with when it comes to healthcare. I have been educated on the healthcare gap that occurs between underprivileged communities and wealthy communities. I have developed extreme interest in helping to bridge this gap. I am drawn to rural, poverty struck, areas where individuals have trouble acquiring the care they need to maintain a healthy life.
    As a senior in high school I obtained a job that required me to visit a seventy-five-year-old woman every other day. She had dementia and although lived alone, required someone to check up on her constantly. Along with encouraging her to do her exercises and take her medicine, occasionally I helped her out of her soiled pants and into clean, dry ones. I learned patience and love from my friend, Jackie. She helped me to grow and encounter the thought of becoming a Physician’s Assistant.
    For the past year I have been working in a dialysis clinic. I see the same patients three days a week for three to four hours each day. The patient interaction that I am able to experience has solidified my desire to work directly with people. These patients live an incredibly hard lifestyle. With diet and fluid restrictions, uncontrollable treatment schedules, and constant maintenance of their access site, patients are often stressed, uncomfortable, and irritable when they come for treatment. With compassion and empathy my goal is to be a pleasant, friendly face for these patients. Besides being someone that pokes them with needles and sends their blood through a machine, I love creating personal, yet professional relationships with these human beings. These relationships are what fuels my ambition and enthusiasm for health and life, while providing fulfillment and joy. I believe that this is what drives me towards a PA career.
    The past 9 months have been monumental for the world of medicine. The Covid virus has impacted millions of lives. Being an essential worker myself, I have experienced the chaos and distress that has effected not just patients, but healthcare workers. My knowledge of public health has aided my ability to calm and reassure patients that although thousands of people including their friends and family are dying, there is hope. I have seen how doctors, PA’s, nurses, and other personnel have stepped up to work even longer shifts in overcrowded hospitals and clinics. I myself have volunteered to work in the covid cohorts that are reserved for dialysis patients who have tested positive for the virus. I may be young, but my experience during this pandemic has made me even more dedicated and motivated. I am more than ready to start my career as a PA.
    I want to help people be the best they can be, physically and mentally. Working with medicine is inspiring. Like teachers, physicians treat patients who are able to venture out into the world and create change. It starts with one person providing health and wellness which contributes to the betterment of other people’s lives. This is able to create a domino effect and opportunity for the improvement of society. I believe my curiosity and eagerness for learning is perfectly matched with the endless education and research obtainable in the medical field. I have worked with PA’s in the emergency room, operating room, dialysis clinic, and countless offices. I have seen the autonomy PA’s are able to have while also being able to work as a team with nurses and assistants alongside the partnership they share with a Physician.

    I am still working quite intensely, I also am still thinking of the perfect ending statement.

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    • Whitney Prosperi says

      August 24, 2020 at 12:41 pm

      Michaela,
      You are off to a good start.
      I would describe a patient/PA interaction you have witnessed during your shadowing or work with PAs. What about this interchange confirmed your desire to become a PA? What did you admire about their clinical knowledge and skill?
      I would also expand on the clinical skills and knowledge you’ve gained working at the dialysis clinic. Also mention your collaboration with your coworkers since this is such an integral part of the PA profession.
      For your conclusion, tie back to your introduction in some way, reiterating your desire for increased patient care and advanced responsibility and clinical knowledge to intervene in their care.
      Good luck to you!

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14. Teresa says

    August 18, 2020 at 3:16 pm

    On what seemed like just another rainy night, turned out to be a life changing and memorable night. As I look back through the lens of my twelve-year old self sitting in that hospital room and vividly remembering the awe feeling when telling myself, “The doctor trusts me to translate the medical diagnosis to my immigrant uncle.” I remember the helpless feeling of wanting to be able to do more when the doctor had entrusted me to deliver the news of a near fatal case of infant jaundice for my newborn cousin. Being helpless in the moment didn’t translate into being hopeless for the future as my vision steered towards becoming a medical care provider serving others through quality and compassionate care. From that moment, I’ve immersed myself into experiences to develop skills that will allow me to take the next steps in serving others in the healthcare field as a future physician assistant.
    Growing up as the only daughter to Vietnamese immigrants, I fully embraced my responsibility to serve those whose voices are silenced due to language barriers. Just as I was the primary translator in the family at medical appointments, I leveraged my bilingual skill to help the underserved in my community seek care at our Annual Southeast Asian Health Fair. During this experience, I developed my interpersonal communication skills and was able to build positive relationships with people in the community I lived in. Lending an ear to listen to the complications the underserved face with our increasingly complex healthcare system. This feedback challenged me to discern how I could cast a wider net to be a voice for the underserved. That’s when the path led me to join like-minded individuals in the Pre-PA club at Portland State University, where I learned about the variety in specialities that PAs can pursue, therefore I strongly believe that this will allow me to be the ear that listens, the hand that aids, and the voice for the voiceless in my community.
    Navigating through life’s journey with servant leadership in mind led me to serve clients as a certified nursing assistant. Through the 2,100+ hours of service to patients I was challenged to further develop my skills in practicing patience, effective communication skills, and quality decision making. Over 3 years working as a CNA, 94-year-old client Sandy, profoundly impacted and helped me reaffirm my decision to pursue the PA profession through our frequent hospital visits for her osteoarthritis. Preferring to see her PA, Sandy was always impressed by the level of care she received along with positive interactions, clinical competence, and meticulousness that PAs have. When COVID-19 spiked in senior living facilities in America, we experienced many uncertainties given the high-risk coronavirus posed to the residents. With unusually high transmission rates in senior living facilities, I made the tough decision to step away from my duties as a CNA in order to protect high risk individuals in my household. Being sidelined from serving others during the pandemic left me itching to do more. That itch was relieved when I made and contributed face masks for my local hospitals to support the healthcare heroes on the frontlines of battling COVID-19. It was rewarding to contribute to the battle but with the disproportionate effect COVID-19 has had on minorities, I am eager to provide great preventative care to minorities to prevent future tragic outcomes.
    Fully immersing myself as a student of the profession led me to opportunities to intern a Medical Doctor as an office assistant and shadow a General Practice Physician Assistant and a Lead Specialty Surgical Physician Assistant. I gained valuable insight into visiting patients, practice history and physical examinations (H&Ps), charting notes, and collaborating with other specialties. During these opportunities, I learned about the daily workflow of each profession and how impactful each can be with their patients. I admired the PA’s willingness to focus on quality patient care by giving the gift of time to their patients. The autonomous workflow while also showcasing humility when collaborating with other medical care providers allowed me to see how my practice of servant leadership will translate.
    The obstacles that presented itself along the way has challenged me to adapt to changes. It was my freshman year of college when I was blindly t-boned by a driver who ran a red light. The sharp pain running down my back was the only thing I could register as the initial adrenaline wore off. On the road to recovery, the pain and physical therapy sessions started to affect my grades negatively. Navigating this challenge allowed to rededicate my focus by finding new ways to be effective in the classroom. This is illustrated as my GPA improved subsequently after I completed my physical therapy sessions and I finished my undergraduate degree with strong positive momentum.
    The journey to this opportunity to apply for PA school certainly hasn’t been easy but as I look back at that twelve-year-old girl at the hospital. I’m grateful for each opportunity and challenge that was presented along the way because its prepared me to be the bring my best individual self to a PA program. In the spirit of serving others, just as I have served my friends, family, peers, clients, and community, I look forward to the opportunity to serve your PA program knowing that in the process of touching others’ lives, it is actually my life that is saved.

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    • Whitney Prosperi says

      August 24, 2020 at 12:24 pm

      Teresa,
      I think your emphasis on servant leadership is strong throughout your essay. Also, I think it is effective how you tied your conclusion back to your intro.
      I think it would be helpful to see you interacting with a patient who increased your desire to do more for patients. Show yourself, in your work as a CNA, providing clinical care while connecting with a patient on a personal level. You want to show what you have to offer as a future PA and how you perform your duties.
      Also, I would describe what aspects of the PA profession appeal to you. Do you desire more time/connection with patients? The ability to switch specialties? The ability to collaborate with a healthcare team and supervising physician?
      I wish you good luck in the process!

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15. Tim David says

    August 18, 2020 at 12:17 pm

    “Rescue 50 – you’re responding to an auto versus pedestrian at the intersection of John Trail and 18th Street. A deputy is on scene working a code.” It was 0630 hours, nearing the conclusion of my second shift as a paramedic. I rubbed the sleep out of my eyes as I was contemplating the reality of my situation. I could feel the accelerating build-up of adrenaline and anxiety as I stared off into the bright red emergency lights of the fire engine in front of us. Arriving on scene, we saw a young man in the roadway laying in a pool of blood. In the moment I stepped off the truck, the ray of clarity burst through the clouds of anxiety.

    We began resuscitation as no pulse was felt. Confidently and clearly, I delegated tasks to crew members. The protocols and algorithms were performed with much acuity. All interventions were well-orchestrated amidst the chaos of other emergency sirens, cars rushing by and gut-wrenching screams of bystanders. Despite getting the patient off-scene within ten minutes to the trauma center, he was pronounced dead upon arrival. The adrenaline began to wane as I walked out of the trauma room, feeling defeated. I found solace knowing that I gave it my best effort, despite an uncontrollable circumstance. I received further confirmation that I perform best when the stakes are at their highest.

    By this time, I had already been on the pathway to the physician assistant (PA) profession. I knew that the prospect of high-stress situations I would face as a PA would be handled gracefully and without any reserves.

    My choice of the PA profession was a process, rather than an epiphany. It began as a young, nineteen-year-old missionary serving in the Marshall Islands of the central pacific. After learning a language in four months and doing my all to provide temporal and spiritual support to others in a secluded area with limited resources, I knew I had a talent for making the best of challenging situations. In pondering my future career path at the time, I knew that I was being prepared for a career that required these
    attributes.

    Upon returning to the United States, I began working and going to school. I decided to pursue firefighting. Although I had no prior knowledge or intention of getting into medicine, I found excitement with the prospect of becoming an emergency medical technician (EMT); it is a requirement in my state to become a firefighter. The resilience I developed from past experiences was tested further, as my father was diagnosed with stage IV lung cancer and eventually succumbed to the disease as I was completing the fire academy. Regardless of the harsh circumstances, I knew I had stay my course and
    persevere.

    A year later, I was hired with the fire department and immediately began paramedic school. The challenge of being a full-time paramedic student, a probationary firefighter, and working a side job was daunting. Through it all, I became more intrigued with medicine. Each call I ran came with more experience gained, and my desire to indulge in medicine deepened.

    Over time, my desire to learn more about medicine grew into the consideration for taking my level of care higher. I began to take notice to the PA’s who I transferred patients to in the emergency department. Their role intrigued me because of the extensive knowledge they displayed and their personable vibe with patients and with other healthcare providers. They seemed enthused with my reports and with their craft, and they had an uncanny ability to gain the trust of their patients off the bat. My interest was especially piqued upon learning how versatile and flexible PA’s are across an array of specialties. As one who is skilled in multiple fields, this seemed to be an adequate fit for myself.

    This interest grew into action, as I sought to shadow a PA for a better understanding of their crucial role in medicine. During my shadowing experience, I witnessed a family practice PA make a complex diagnosis of a hiatal hernia simply through a detailed patient assessment and physical examination, without any imaging tests. I desired to emulate the level of competency, knowledge and versatility shown by that PA

    During my time shadowing, I entered into fatherhood with the birth of my son, all the while being a full-time student and firefighter paramedic. The reality of becoming a father confirmed to me that all of the sacrifice and effort to become a PA will be worth it in the end for my family.

    The clarity of my thought process on Rescue 50 in those early hours is a testament to my ability to perform under high-stress. My ability to master new skills in a short time, against high stakes, is a certainty. My dedication and time management skills, despite hardship, has stood the test of time. Even
    now, as I work on the front lines of the COVID-19 pandemic on an ambulance with a high call volume, I continue to defy the odds and make this goal a reality. These developments will carry me through school and my career as a PA.

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    • Whitney Prosperi says

      August 24, 2020 at 12:08 pm

      Tim,
      Your introduction is compelling, showing your ability to think on your feet in a traumatic situation.
      I would suggest elaborating some more on why becoming a PA is a good fit for you. What aspects of the profession speak to you? Is it the ability to switch specialties? More time/contact with patients? I would mention your desire to collaborate with a healthcare team since this is such an integral part of the PA role.
      I would also highlight some of the clinical skills and knowledge you’ve gained in your time as an EMT.
      I think you are off to a good start.
      I’m not saying you need this, but remember that if you’re in need of more help, we are taking submissions for our essay revision service.
      Good luck to you!

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      • Tim David says

        August 24, 2020 at 1:59 pm

        Hello. Thank you for the reply and for the feedback. Here is a revised version of the previous one. This one is slightly over the character limit, but my problem is fitting everything since I have so much I want to talk about. I wanted to mention my skills learned as an EMT and medic but I included that in my experiences tab.

        Over the course of my mortal journey, I have walked in the shoes of many roles. Some of these roles have been temporary, whereas others are everlasting. Each role has provided me with the necessary development needed to fill the prestigious role of physician assistant (PA). The challenges and tribulations I have faced in these roles have awarded me precious skills, attributes and opportunities that can be neither given, nor taken away. Indeed, these experiences have been my compass in the wilderness of life. I thrive in tribulation, and I am well-acquainted with situations of high-stress.

        This was confirmed to me during my second shift as a paramedic. The dispatch came out: “Rescue 50 – you’re responding to an auto versus pedestrian at the intersection of Orange Blossom Trail and 39th Street. A deputy on scene is working a code.” The accelerating adrenaline and anxiety filled my being as I contemplated the reality of the situation. Supervising my first cardiac arrest call, traumatic in nature at that, is the pinnacle of paramedicine. As I saw the young man laid out in the roadway in a pool of blood, my anxiety was met with an undeniable feeling of inner peace and clarity. I immediately delegated tasks and assigned roles to my crew members, as we started resuscitation and invasive interventions on the pulseless young man. The appropriate algorithms and protocols were followed with much acuity, despite the chaos of surrounding emergency sirens, cars rushing by and gut-wrenching screams of bystanders. Off scene within ten minutes, the patient was pronounced dead upon arrival. As the adrenaline began to wane, I walked out of the trauma room, feeling disappointed with the results. A feeling of solace came over me, as I knew that my relaxed temperament and competence in that dire situation facilitated my greatest effort.

        I had already begun my journey to the PA profession prior to this experience. I understood that the prospect of high-stress situations faced as a PA would undoubtedly be handled gracefully and without reservation.

        My choice of the PA profession was not so much of an epiphany, as it was a process. As a young nineteen-year-old missionary, the seed of resilience was being planted. I lived and served in the Marshall Islands of the central pacific. I navigated the struggles of a developing country, while learning the Marshallese language in approximately four months, surviving through harsh living conditions with limited resources, and learning the customs and laws. These sacrifices were afforded to provide assistance and love to this underserved populous.

        Returning to the United States and entering the fire service provided me with my first exposure to the medical field. During such time, as I attended EMT school and the fire academy while working on the weekends, my father succumbed to the effects of cancer two weeks prior to the completion of my training. This difficult circumstance was at odds with my resolve to push forward, but I did not cease my progress. Enrolling in paramedic school immediately after being hired with the fire department is a testament to that. The amount of skills, experiences, and information I gathered truly exceeded the amount of time allotted for such a task in normal circumstances. I persevered through long nights of running a plethora of medical and fire calls, while either attending classes or working my side-job the next day.

        Overtime, I began to consider taking my level of care and education higher. I started taking notice to the PA’s who I transferred patients to in the emergency department. Their role intrigued me because of the extensive knowledge they displayed and their personable vibe with patients. They seemed enthused with my reports and with their craft. As someone who is skilled in multiple fields, my interest was especially piqued upon learning how versatile and flexible PA’s are across an array of specialties. Perhaps the most important component about PA’s that stands out to me is their ability to work in a team environment, as that is a skill I have developed in my experience. This interest grew into action, as I sought to shadow a PA for a better understanding of their crucial role in medicine.

        During my shadowing experience, I witnessed a family practice PA make a complex diagnosis of a hiatal hernia simply through a detailed patient assessment and physical examination, without any imaging tests. I desire to emulate the level of competency, knowledge and versatility shown by that PA.

        Perhaps the most crucial roles I have filled during this sojourn have been those of a father and a husband. While sacrificing to shadow, work and go to school full-time, the birth of my first-born son has borne new-found meaning in all my endeavors. I have overcome the treachery of the isles of the sea, suffered the pain of loss, persevered the raging inferno of structures, witnessed death and life anew, and continue to battle through a pandemic on the front lines. I am proud to be a future heir to the dedication, fortitude and sacrifice that awards one who crosses into the realm of the PA profession.

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