The Physician Assistant Essay and Personal Statement Collaborative

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1. Celara Kindred says

   September 8, 2023 at 5:11 am

   It was 75 degrees in Virginia on a February day. As soon as we were released from school, my friend and I decided to go to the mall to enjoy the unusually great weather. On our way, I got a call from my mother stating my father was in the hospital and to come quickly. Knowing he had been fine and healthy just the day before I thought very little of it, but nothing could have prepared me for that day. The sudden death of my father left me in a state of confusion and a plethora of thoughts ran through my mind but mostly “how did this take place”. I recall never hearing from a doctor or nurse what actually happened to cause his untimely death, we were just left with the cause being a heart attack. Weeks later, we were told it turned out to be an aneurysm which at the time, I had no idea what that could possibly be. From that day forward I was determined to expand my knowledge in order to make my own impact on the healthcare system. Upon extensive research of multiple healthcare professions such as veterinarians, nurses, doctors, pharmacists and sonographers, I came across physician assistants. Over time, I have made myself more familiar with the PA profession, its origin, and what it takes to become a physician assistant. I am interested in becoming a physician assistant because of the ability to work different specialties (even multiple at once), and the supportive atmosphere. Being able to consult with other providers and work together to complete a common goal is extremely important in this field. Most importantly, amongst providing them with outstanding care, I admire the possibility of making genuine and amiable connections with the patients.
   Recently, I shadowed two PA’s and it gave me the chance to see first hand the day to day responsibilities of the career and it also enhanced my desire to become a PA. This past February, I had the opportunity to shadow Carsen Hyde who is a cardiovascular surgeon at Tidal Health. I observed a transcatheter aortic valve replacement, a cardiac catheterization, a coronary artery bypass surgery, and a robotic thoracic surgery, along with making rounds to check on patients. I vividly remember visiting a patient where the family was present. At this time, the patient was unconscious and intubated, which had his wife and sister extremely concerned. Mr. Hyde explained in detailed layman’s terms why the patient had to be intubated and his current status. Towards the end, the wife thanked him for his diligence and gave us both a warm hug. In this moment, it felt great seeing that the patient’s family had a feeling of peace to know how their loved one was doing. In addition, knowing I could do nothing further to assist in the recovery of the patient left me feeling unsatisfied and it has even become another motivator towards my journey to become a PA. During this experience, I witnessed the dedication and compassion that Carsen showed for his patients and their families. I also was able to see the relationship he and his fellow PA’s had with the doctors and nurse practitioners. They displayed effortless teamwork and used their skills to work together for the betterment of their patients. Not only was Carsen a great example of a PA, but he displayed traits I see in myself. From all that I observed during my time shadowing him confirmed that this was the profession I feel that I belong to. Seeing a great provider in action made me come to the realization that the doctors involved with my father could have ameliorated the experience they gave us. They had the ability to have more empathy, done better at clarifying the cause of death, but most importantly, they could have been more personable given the situation at hand. I’ve taken from this that the day I become a PA, I vow to give patients and their family solace and comfort as if they were my own. Ultimately, I believe I am an epitome of what an amazing physician assistant should be and I know that I would be an exceptional asset to your program and a valuable addition to the physician assistant profession.

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   • Whitney Prosperi says

     September 18, 2023 at 11:06 am

     Celara,
     I am sorry about the loss of your father. Also, I trust that you will be a skilled provider who honors his legacy.
     I suggest condensing somewhat throughout your essay, so you have room to elaborate on clinical experience and medical knowledge gained in your different roles.
     Also, I recommend including a patient care story in your essay that shows you in action providing clinical care of some kind while connecting with a patient on a personal level. You want to reveal some of those qualities that will make you an exceptional provider.
     Your paragraph describing shadowing did a great job of explaining what appeals to you about the PA role.
     Lastly, you may consider softening the language somewhat about your father’s providers. It is a fine line but is best to avoid the appearance of criticizing another provider.
     I wish you the best. Remember that we are taking submissions for our revision service should you want more help.

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2. Kristin says

   August 16, 2023 at 7:20 am

   During my younger years of age, what I was going to wear to school in the morning was the only stress in life. I wasn’t overwhelmed about paying a bill or having to interview for a new job, but instead, my worries were if it was too hot for pants or if my shorts were long enough to meet the dress code regulations. It was not until after graduating high school and coming home from college for the first time that I noticed everything started to change.

   I have always loved everything that had to do with health and taking care of the human body. If there was an article online, I would read it from start to finish. Everything from the benefits of cucumbers in the body to the health implications of smoking cigarettes. I wanted to know every detail they had to offer. If I had the opportunity to dive into someone’s body and watch the effects of such things happen firsthand, I would be first in line. I was extremely fascinated. Over time, these interests, and the research I would do began to tailor more and more toward specific aspects of my father’s life. This was when I knew my love for health, and the body would go hand and hand with the empathetic nature of my heart for my patients.

   I always had this feeling that the medical world was meant for me but it wasn’t until I came home from college after not seeing my father for a couple of months that everything set in once and for all. Most children who haven’t seen their parents in three months would walk into their homes filled with joy, ready to embrace them with a big hug. For me, I instantly got a gut-wrenching feeling in my stomach and my heart sank as I wondered why my father looked as if he had lost over twenty pounds since the last time I saw him. As a man that was already lean and fit, it was a very noticeable difference. I almost felt like I was meeting a new version of him that I never met during the first 18 years of my life. From that day on, I was more motivated than I had ever been; I left back to school more for sure of my future than ever before.

   These life experiences and personal curiosity naturally extended into my formal education and cemented my path to becoming a physician assistant. Throughout my studies of subjects such as human anatomy, microbiology, and pathophysiology, I was forced to think deeper than I ever had about health before. Dissecting human bodies in anatomy allowed me to see and compare a healthy and fit heart to an unhealthy one where you could see the visceral fat around it. Microbiology allowed me to dive deeper visually into things like fungi and viruses and gain a visual understanding of how fast bacteria can grow on everything. Throughout pathophysiology I was able to obtain a greater appreciation for the human body itself and was motivated to take better care of it after learning and witnessing the many different implications that diseases and injuries can have on it. I have always used my passions and life experiences to motivate me during these challenging times. Not to my surprise, this motivation led to nearly perfect final grades in all of these classes.

   Moreover, these outcomes led to further ambition, and I decided to challenge myself even more. I knew I had a passion for health and fitness so I decided to take a couple of courses through ISSA and become a certified personal trainer as well as a certified nutritionist. Fluctuating between a variety of interests, abilities, and studies, my adaptability is comparable to physician assistants, who have the capability to practice their skills in many different areas and specialties. Through my educational background and experience of personal training and providing nutritional advice, I have been able to take on a client, dissect their habits, modify them, and slowly increase these changes until they have met their goals. Alongside this, they also gained solutions to health problems they have faced and a better understanding of their health which is what patients expect from their physician assistant.

   Subsequently, my journey took me to Beaumont Hospital where I began to care for my first patients who were physically ill aside from my father. As a nursing assistant, I encountered a myriad of patient histories and conditions, each deepening my understanding of human health. During my first month on the job, I was awarded employee of the month by my coworkers. In addition to that after the first couple of months I was granted the opportunity to begin training new hires on the job. Through my efforts I am able to confidently help my patients and put a smile on their faces and the warm feeling in return is an amazing sentiment. I have encountered many reassuring experiences during my time working at Beaumont. Some examples include patient families bringing me in a gift and telling me how grateful they are that I was able to care for their family. Or, a patient giving me a card with a letter inside about how I made their experience better. Working at Beaumont has been a very rewarding and fulfilling learning experience that I will always be able to reflect and look back on with a smile when I become a PA.

   My experience at Beaumont is what granted me the opportunity to job shadow my first PA. I vividly remember one patient in particular. Upon entering the room, the patient was sitting on the edge of the bed rocking back and forth, she said she hadn’t slept in two days. With grace and understanding the PA bent down to her bedside and asked her what was going on. After a long and in-depth conversation, the PA realized this was an issue that was deeper than what she could fix herself. She ended her visit with the patient by providing her with articles about different support groups and rehab facilities that would be beneficial to the patient and her future.

   The patient’s motivation to get better and heal was not only because of the resources the PA provided her with but also due to her empathy, warm presence, and understanding of the deep topic being discussed. Reflecting on this situation after going home that night, I knew this was the profession for me. I felt myself relating to the admiration and care that the PA had for her patients, which solidified my decision to become a PA even more. Ever since that day and witnessing that transformative interaction between the PA and her patient, I’ve longed to be able to be in her shoes and provide the sincere care that she did. The level of respect and admirability I have toward physician assistants is what drove me to work the night shift. It motivated me to want to work long hours in the hospital so that I could be around PAs and learn from them day to day.

   Not long after this experience, did I receive a call from my mother hysterically crying as she told me my father wasn’t breathing. I tried walking her through the steps on how to give him CPR over the phone until the paramedics got there. It didn’t help. On January 14th, 2023, my father passed away at the age of 44. I couldn’t help but think about that experience I had while shadowing the physician assistant at Beaumont after losing him. I just wondered if he would have had support or someone to give him resources like she did, maybe, he would still be here. This situation made me realize why I was working so hard toward my career as a physician assistant and why I have never once thought about giving up.

   In conclusion, being a physician assistant is so much more than just reviewing medical records, putting in orders, and providing treatment. At the end of the day, you are given the title because you have proven you are worthy of being part of a care team that is responsible for your patients’ lives. Like William James once said “Act as if what you do makes a difference. It does.” I would love to transfer the motivational stress I felt from my father into my work life and use it in the same way I have throughout my entire journey to becoming a physician assistant. I want my patients to feel seen and heard, and I believe I can achieve this due to the fact that I view my patients as a vessel of love and light in my world.

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   • Whitney Prosperi says

     August 18, 2023 at 1:21 pm

     Kristin,
     I am so sorry about the loss of your father. I trust that you will honor him as you empathetically provide for patients.
     I suggest eliminating your first paragraph simply because you will need the characters to describe further how you decided to pursue the PA path. You will likely need to condense throughout your essay to make room to add in some more details. I would include a paragraph describing what precisely about the PA profession appeals to you. (The ability to expand care to underserved patients, switch specialties, and work independently as well as with a supervising physician?)
     Also, include any clinical skills gained throughout your different roles. I would describe a patient care story from your time at Beaumont that shows you connecting with a patient on a personal level while providing care. You want to reveal some qualities that will make you an effective PA.
     Should you want more help, remember that we are taking submissions for our essay revision service. I wish you good luck, Kristin.

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3. Micalina Abbott says

   August 15, 2023 at 1:41 pm

   My journey to becoming a physician assistant has been shaped by transformative experiences and an early connection to healthcare. Growing up with a nurse for a mother I developed an admiration for the medical field. Observing her dedicated work gave me firsthand understanding of healthcare professionals’ immense impact. During my mother’s battle with breast cancer in my teenage years and early adulthood, I became her caregiver, teaching me the importance of compassionate care and patient advocacy. As I transitioned into this caregiving role my appreciation for holistic care deepened, instilling a commitment to one day provide empowering, attentive care. Embarking on the path to becoming a physician assistant I carry invaluable lessons from caring for my mother. My goal is to bring compassion and dedication to ensure patients receive comprehensive, individualized care. My passion for patient care and leadership was sparked by early healthcare exposure and solidified through caregiving experiences. These experiences have confirmed my desire for a fulfilling career as a physician assistant.

   During my time as a nursing assistant at an assisted living facility, my responsibilities extended beyond helping with activities of daily living and monitoring vital signs. Many residents sought companionship and empathy. This position compelled me to reevaluate the depth of emotional support I was capable of providing. As I cared for the elderly, I built a rapport with each patient, finding that validating their concerns increased their willingness to participate in their care. This experience deepened my commitment to providing empathetic, patient-centered care.

   Working as a nursing assistant at the children’s hospital expanded my understanding of compassionate care. Frequently my role involved acting as a sitter and providing one-on-one patient care for patients with complex psychiatric conditions, such as suicide attempts and eating disorders. This patient population required a deeper level of emotional support. Some patients were discontent with their diagnosis and hospital admission and were not always the most kind. I learned that remaining compassionate despite a lack of trust from patients is crucial in healthcare. I came to understand that a lot of the negative behaviors these patients exhibited were a result of the severity of their mental illness. Viewing the child and their illness as separate entities enhanced my empathy. These experiences pushed me to grow both professionally and personally, further emphasizing the compassionate and attentive care I hope to provide in the future.

   I had the privilege of shadowing a physician assistant who specialized in pediatric otolaryngology. As I observed each patient interaction, I noticed the level of patience and empathy displayed by the physician assistant. Despite encountering similar cases throughout the morning, she maintained an unwavering attentiveness and consistently delivered quality care. Parents often expressed similar concerns. She continuously delivered high-quality care to each of her patients and families, demonstrating an unwavering level of attentiveness and compassion in each interaction. I was inspired by her ability to consistently deliver quality care and create a supportive environment for her patients. As an aspiring physician assistant, I aim to provide the same level of exceptional care. I want to be a provider who embodies patience, empathy, and a commitment to delivering high-quality patient-centered care.

   Through my many experiences in healthcare, I have come to understand the kind of physician assistant I want to be. I value holistic, patient-centered care, cultivating trust with my patients and fellow providers for collaborative efforts. I aim to actively involve my patients in the decision-making process, respecting their opinions and cultural preferences. Healthcare should extend beyond treating physical ailments and encompass a holistic approach that addresses the physical, emotional, and social aspects of a patient’s life. My goal is to improve the quality of life for each patient, empowering them to lead fulfilling and meaningful lives despite their health challenges. Working alongside other healthcare professionals, I will utilize the knowledge and skills of different specialists to provide comprehensive care. As a physician assistant partnering with other providers is essential, fostering a culture of teamwork and shared learning leading to better patient outcomes. Successful collaboration with providers and patients builds trusting relationships. My experiences in patient care deepened my understanding of what it means to be a caregiver. As a future physician assistant, I am dedicated to achieving successful collaboration, patient engagement, and comprehensive care. Through adopting a holistic approach and fostering patient-centered care, I am committed to promoting the well-being and overall quality of life of each patient.

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   • Whitney Prosperi says

     August 18, 2023 at 1:06 pm

     Micalina,
     Your essay reveals your desire to provide individualized care for each patient.
     I suggest including a patient care story that shows you in action providing care while also connecting with a patient on a personal level.
     Also, describe some clinical skills and medical knowledge you have gained in your roles.
     Most importantly, I would include more details about what appeals to you about the PA profession, specifically over another type of healthcare provider. What exactly speaks to you? Some of these details may include the ability to expand care to underserved patients, switch specialties, etc.
     You may need to condense so that you can include more of these details.
     I wish you good luck. Should you need more help, remember that we are taking submissions for our essay revision service.

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4. Chelsea says

   August 12, 2023 at 6:05 am

   I was on my way to school when I received a frantic call from my mother saying “Your sister is on her way to the hospital, tell dad.” We quickly made a u-turn headed to the hospital. Watching my 8 year old sister lay in the hospital bed, unable to speak because of a bottle cap being stuck in her throat was far from how I expected to spend my Wednesday morning. At that moment, I knew that I wanted to do more. I knew that I wanted to be on the other side of the situation, caring for the patient. There was an immense sense of comfort knowing that the team was going to do everything they could to make sure that my sister would come out of this okay.

   Despite the rocky journey to PA school, my commitment to a life of service has never faltered. Throughout my own health journey, I noticed I was not always seeing a physician. In my conversations with my primary care provider, who is a physician assistant, we discussed my interest in medicine, and what my future career could look like. As I was still exploring career path options, she explained her role, years of education, and scope of practice to me. Just from a few conversations, my curiosity of what the PA profession entailed grew. I learned that PAs are trained as generalists, which allows for the opportunity to practice in different specialties and sub-speciality areas. For someone like myself who enjoys picking up new skills and delving into many interests, I favored having the flexibility of expanding my knowledge without declaring one speciality for the entirety of my career. After personal research, I preferred the idea of going through a two year program and beginning my career sooner. To build a strong academic foundation, and prepare myself for the rigors of PA education, I continued to take courses postgraduate. Although I was working full time, amidst a pandemic and other worldly happenings, I was determined to not let where I was to be my final destination.

   Most recently, I’ve served as a medical assistant in a gynecologic oncology office. I immediately took the opportunity to shadow physician assistants during our clinics, and observed their day to day responsibilities. In addition to shadowing, I gained hands-on experience assisting in procedures inclduing, drain pulls, biopsies, injections, and wound care. In this position I witnessed the true collaboration between PAs and physicians, and how core medical teams best operate, knowing that teamwork is the heart of the workforce. I became inspired by the PAs and the independence that they have, whilst having the support of supervising physicians. The PAs have the ability to spend more time with patients, allowing them to build connections with every visit.

   On top of all these experiences, what brings it all home for me is my identity as a first generation black woman. I have personally seen the impact that lack of access to healthcare can have on a patient, which has driven my passion to work in underserved communities. At the time that she was diagnosed with colon cancer, my grandmother was living in Cameroon. Unfortunately, many African countries, including Cameroon, have healthcare systems that rank much lower than other more developed countries, like the United States. Now, living in the states and seeing similar experiences in what I thought had more access than not, I hope to use my profession as a PA to help bridge the gap of access to healthcare.

   Additionally, I spent a summer in my undergraduate career volunteering at a nonprofit organization in Northeast Washington DC, a city unfortunately known for its health disparities. I was able to help serve HIV positive women and create intimate relationships with many patients, which was incredibly rewarding. I heard personal stories from women living with HIV who struggled to get timely treatment. This was another early exposure into how too often, patients lack resources and treatment to the healthcare they have a right to. I know that as a PA, I can help provide the resources that are crucial to better health outcomes. As a future PA, I am dedicated to the ongoing learning and training that’s necessary to being culturally aware in the many communities that I will serve.

   I find myself thinking of a quote from the late Maya Angelou stating, “People will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but they will never forget how you made them feel.” This quote resonates with me and is one I have held tightly in my journey to becoming a PA, and one I hope to exemplify as a PA. As a physician assistant, I will be committed to strengthening my knowledge in medicine, expanding my skill set and providing the best health education to help reach optimal health for all of my patients. Becoming a physician assistant is my dream, my passion, and how I want to make an impact in the world.

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   • Whitney Prosperi says

     August 14, 2023 at 2:37 pm

     Chelsea,
     Your introduction grabs the reader’s attention immediately. In addition, you do a good job describing what appeals to you about the PA profession. Likewise, your observations from your shadowing experience are strong.
     I suggest including a patient care story that shows you connecting with a patient on a personal level while providing care of some kind. You want to reveal some qualities that will make you an effective PA.
     Lastly, in your conclusion, you may want to tie back to your introduction somehow.
     Remember that we are taking submissions for our essay revision service should you want more help. I wish you good luck, Chelsea.

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5. Philip Belidor Jr says

   August 8, 2023 at 11:10 am

   “My number one son” is a play on words with a compliment as a sidekick. That is how my mother would refer to me whenever I achieved something noteworthy. Despite her praise I never felt like I was truly excelling. During my final semester of college, I was diagnosed with depression, extreme anxiety, and ADHD at age 21 causing me to withdraw from classes. Coming from a Caribbean background, mental health was never discussed so my diagnosis came off like I was lazy or didn’t care about my work, but that was far from the truth. While searching for ways to better myself, the podomoro method was extremely helpful with tasks, such as my post-graduate classes, it’s a time management method using twenty-five-minute intervals for tasks/work with a five-minute break in-between and a long break after four sessions. Another resource that aided me was therapy and medications which made my symptoms more manageable. Despite my shortcomings, I persevered and continued my endeavors while acquiring traits such as compassion, adaptability, patience, and communication skills, that will help prepare me for a long career as a Physician Assistant (PA).

   As her only child, my mother accepted nothing but the best, which meant I needed a career choice that would bring honor to our family. It was settled that medical school was my destination, Dr. Belidor had a nice ring to it, and I initially thought it was my dream job but I still wondered. It was not until I spoke with my girlfriend’s mother, a physical therapist, that the idea of becoming a PA was presented. I eagerly sought out more information and discovered that the career is primarily focused on patient care. This resonates with me as I possess a significant amount of patient care experience, but it is important to note that there is more to the job. These mid-level providers work under a supervising physician, but the PA’s scope of practice includes some of the same work as a primary care physician depending on the state, not to mention, the ability to work independently. While observing PAs, I found their versatility to be astonishing. I have found some who work in aesthetics part-time while also working in urgent care part-time, and even some who work in six different specialties. It is truly remarkable to be able to shift from one specialty to another and have a more generalized education in medicine, rather than just having expertise in one specific field. The opportunity to learn and excel in numerous areas of medicine is invaluable. It is especially useful for answering patients’ questions about specialty areas that may not be covered by their provider. This ability to switch specialties and learn on the go can make a significant difference in patient care plans and ultimately revolutionize the healthcare industry, a revolution I would proudly support.

   During my time working in the medical field, I discovered my passion for providing hands-on care to patients. Initially, I found satisfaction in organizing medical files, sorting blood samples, and taking vitals. However, I longed for more direct patient interaction. Working in memory care and hospice was especially rewarding as it allowed me to grow in patience and compassion. Each patient is unique, and I learned to approach each patient with empathy and a willingness to assist in any way possible. During one lengthy shift, I assisted my very first Alzheimer’s patient with showering and dressing but faced challenges due to his resistance and aggressive behavior. Nonetheless, I remained patient and waited for him to calm down. Despite his condition, we were able to share some lightheartedness and humor. He was confused about his whereabouts and believed we were in a Canadian hotel. I used this as an opportunity to convince him that we were late for a flight to Paris and to prevent us from missing it I needed to get him ready. He cooperated, allowing me to help him shower and change successfully. We even discussed potential activities to do in Paris before he retired for the night. Experiences like this brought joy to his heart and mine as well. I never got loud or upset with him but instead, I adapted and thought quickly to find a way to provide care that worked for him.

   I am thrilled to embark on my journey toward a Master of Physician Assistant Studies degree. Although it will come with a strenuous workload, sacrifice, and my fullest attention, I say to you with a smile bring it on! As a prospective PA, I aim to address issues like iatrophobia, an extreme fear of doctors or medical tests, and white-coat hypertension in my community and beyond. I believe my ability to provide compassionate care, adaptability, patience, and effective communication will serve as a natural remedy for these concerns. I am committed to making a positive impact on the world and improving the quality of life for all, maybe then, will I truly feel like a “number one son”.

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   • Whitney Prosperi says

     August 10, 2023 at 7:28 am

     Philip,
     You do a great job explaining what about the PA profession appeals to you.
     I suggest changing your introduction to include the story about how you discovered the PA role. While it is unfair, some people may let your story about depression overshadow your other great qualities of tenacity and compassion.
     You may also want to remove your language about considering the MD path, as you don’t want to spend those characters there.
     If you have any shadowing experience, describe that. Was there an interaction between PA/supervising physician or PA/patient that solidified your decision?
     Should you want more help, remember we are taking submissions for our essay revision service. I wish you good luck, Philip.

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     • Philip Belidor Jr says

       August 11, 2023 at 6:21 pm

       Thank you! I will be sure to check out the service.

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6. Amita says

   August 4, 2023 at 6:26 pm

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   “Success is not final; failure is not fatal: it is the courage to continue that counts.” This quote from Winston Churchill inspires me everyday. Growing up in a family where no one works in medicine, I always knew that I wanted to become a healthcare worker and make a difference for many families like mine who struggle to find proper care due to lack of knowledge about the healthcare system. That 8-year-old me didn’t know what exactly I wanted to become in healthcare, but my search ended when I met a physician assistant during my dad’s hospital visit. My dad was diagnosed with hepatitis C and was required to visit doctors on a regular basis. I was his primary caretaker and translator, so I attended all his appointments. When we met his PA for the first time, it left an astonishing impression on my mind from how he introduced himself and his bedside manners. It was the first time that someone in a white coat spent time not only explaining everything in detail but also allowing us to express our concerns and making sure our questions were answered and explained. Being in a new country and still learning the accent spoken here, I nervously asked him, “what is a physician assistant? is it same as a doctor?” and he kindly explained the profession and the education that it requires. It was when I knew this is the path I wanted to follow to fulfill my lifelong goal of providing effective healthcare to the community.
   My dad’s passing did put me in tough situations, which impacted on my academics as well. I had two choices, to become a primary breadwinner and quit my education or continue education and not consider my family’s financial and emotional situations. I took a tough decision and continued my education while taking care of my family financially by working more than full time. I knew that this decision would challenge me in many ways, but I raised myself up every time and continued my journey to become a PA with courage. Having my interest set on becoming a PA, I knew that my non-healthcare work experience wouldn’t help me directly towards my goal but working as a cashier and then as an assistant manager helped me gain many skills such as teamwork, work ethics, decision making and customer service. From honors graduate with an associate degree to experiencing some downfalls in my grades in undergraduate, every situation has built me as a stronger person to deal with success or failure.
   My decision to become a PA got even stronger when I started working as a patient care technician (PCT) and a monitor tech in two different hospitals after my graduation. Both roles helped me learn more about the healthcare system and gain skills that are needed to provide effective care. I developed excellent communication and interpersonal skills, improved my capacity to collaborate successfully across disciplines and strengthened my sense of empathy and compassion for patients. In addition to gaining hands-on experience during my gap years, I also worked on building my grade point average through taking additional courses online. Taking these courses online helped me to balance while being able to deliver my care to my patients at work. While actively scouting opportunities to expand my skills, I took a leadership certificate course to help me strengthen my skills which will help me to advocate for my patients and their health. Working at these hospitals afforded me meeting more PA and doctors, and I was able to observe the teamwork in PA profession with not only doctors but with all the medical staff.
   Earned the opportunity to shadow a physician assistant Mary Shoup, I learned more insights about the profession and the day-to-day process of contributing to patients’ health as a PA. Through this experience I learned how I will be able to make more impact on my patients as a PA compared to PCT or any other profession. While Shadowing Mary, I get to experience many incidents where the patient’s outcome was the consequence of the PA’s exceptional skills in addition to her kind, affable, and comforting demeanor toward the patients. Her emphasis on kindness and humility inspired me to take up this profession and preserve those excellent characteristics.
   I believe that through all my experiences, I’m prepared to immerse myself into achieving a great career and its rigorous academic curriculum and clinical skills which will well prepare me to expand my knowledge and ability to help the community. To conclude just a few reasons from many, I strongly believe that PA profession will give me the opportunity to provide more effective care to my patients by working alongside with other medical professionals as a team while continuing my lifelong passion for teamwork and learning. My experiences in life set me apart and have cultured values such as sacrifice, hard work and determination that will keep my courage alive in becoming a successful PA. My goal is to become a physician assistant who will be compassionate and ready to provide the needs in the community to serve the people with diverse backgrounds with my multilingual skills. I believe I embody what Marian Wright Edelman meant when she said,” you really can change the world if you care enough.”

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   • Whitney Prosperi says

     August 6, 2023 at 3:29 pm

     Amita,
     Your story about how you discovered the PA profession is effective and does a great job of revealing some of your motivation for pursuing this path. I suggest spotlighting a few more reasons you are drawn to become a PA. (the ability to switch specialties, working independently and with a supervising physician?)
     Your section describing your shadowing experience is also effective.
     You are wise to discuss your grades, but I suggest moving that explanation to the paragraph before your conclusion. This way, you can reveal some of your positive traits at the beginning of the essay.
     I also suggest including any clinical skills and medical knowledge you gained throughout your journey so far.
     In addition, if possible, I would include a story that shows you in action providing clinical care while connecting with a patient on a personal level.
     Should you want more help, remember that we are taking submissions for our essay revision service. I wish you good luck, Amita.

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7. Amita says

   August 3, 2023 at 8:46 pm

   Looking forward to your feedback! Thank You.

   “Success is not final; failure is not fatal: it is the courage to continue that counts.” This quote from Winston Churchill. Growing up in a family where no one has a career in medicine, I always knew that I wanted to become a healthcare worker and make a difference for many families like mine who struggle to find proper care due to a lack of knowledge about the healthcare system. That 8-year-old me didn’t know what exactly I wanted to become in healthcare, but my search ended when I met a physician assistant during my dad’s hospital visit. My dad was diagnosed with hepatitis C and was required to visit doctors on a regular basis. I was his primary caretaker and translator, so I attended all his appointments. When we met his PA for the first time, it left an astonishing impression on my mind from how he introduced himself and his bedside manners. It was the first time that someone in a white coat spent time not only explaining everything in detail but also allowing us to express our concerns and making sure our questions were answered and explained. Being in a new country and still learning the accent spoken here, I nervously asked him, “What is a physician assistant? Is it the same as a doctor?” and he kindly explained the profession and the education that requires. It was when I knew this is the path, I wanted to follow to fulfill my lifelong goal of providing adequate healthcare to the community.
   My dad’s passing did put me in tough situations, which impacted my academics as well. I had two choices, to become a primary breadwinner and quit my education or continuing education and not consider my family’s financial and emotional situations. I took a tough decision and continued my education while taking care of my family financially by working more than full-time. I knew that this decision would challenge me in many ways, but I raised myself up every time and continued my journey to become a PA with courage. Having my interest set on becoming a PA, I knew that my non-healthcare work experience wouldn’t help me directly towards my goal but working as a cashier and then as an assistant manager helped me gain many skills such as teamwork, work ethics, decision-making, and customer service. From honors graduate with an associate degree to experiencing some downfalls in my grades as an undergraduate, every situation has built me as a stronger person to deal with success or failure.
   My decision to become a PA got even stronger when I started working as a patient care technician (PCT) and a monitor tech in two different hospitals after my graduation. Both roles helped me learn more about the healthcare system and gain the skills that are needed to provide effective care. I developed excellent communication and interpersonal skills, improved my capacity to collaborate successfully across disciplines, and strengthened my sense of empathy and compassion for patients. In addition to gaining hands-on experience during my gap years, I also worked on building my grade point average by taking additional courses online. Taking these courses online helped me to balance while being able to deliver my care to my patients at work. While actively scouting opportunities to expand my skills, I took a leadership certificate course to help me strengthen my skills which will help me to advocate for my patients and their health. Working at these hospitals afforded me meeting more PAs and doctors, and I was able to observe the teamwork in the PA profession with not only doctors but all the medical staff.
   Earned the opportunity to shadow a physician assistant Mary Shoup, I learned more insights about the profession and the day-to-day process of contributing to patients’ health as a PA. Through this experience, I learned how I will be able to make more impact on my patients as a PA compared to PCT or any other profession. While Shadowing Mary, I get to experience many incidences where the patient’s outcome was the consequence of the PA’s exceptional skills in addition to her kind, affable, and comforting demeanor toward the patients. Her emphasis on kindness and humility inspired me to take up this profession and preserve those excellent characteristics.
   I believe that through all my experiences, I’m prepared to immerse myself into achieving a great career and its rigorous academic curriculum and clinical skills which will well prepare me to expand my knowledge and ability to help the community. To conclude just a few reasons from many, I firmly believe that the PA profession will give me the opportunity to provide more effective care to my patients by working alongside other medical professionals in a team while continuing my lifelong passion for teamwork and learning. My experiences in life set me apart and have cultured values such as sacrifice, hard work, and determination that will keep my courage alive in becoming a successful PA. My goal is to become a physician assistant who will be compassionate and ready to provide for the needs of the community to serve people with diverse backgrounds with my multilingual skills. I believe I embody what Marian Wright Edelman meant when she said,” You really can change the world if you care enough.”

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8. Vanessa Bayliss says

   July 31, 2023 at 1:45 pm

   Healthcare is a field that I have been exposed to since I was a child. From the dining room table to family members calling for advice, my mother always seemed to be talking about different treatments and medications. As I got older, the conversations began to revolve around my sister. She was diagnosed with Arnold Chiari Type II and had more providers than I knew that a patient could at the time. I witnessed the power of teamwork and collaboration in order to provide comprehensive care. Observing her entire network propelled me to want to be a part of that care for others.

   While my sister never had any hesitations to work with her providers, it was not the same for my dad. As an adult, he avoided the doctor as much as possible. My mom started to see a physician assistant (PA) that she really loved and was able to convince my dad to see her. He now goes to the PA regularly and has even agreed to take a more active role in his health. Watching this, I have seen the power of creating a comfortable and open space during appointments.

   The environment within an appointment is as important as the care that is delivered. I firmly believe in comprehensive patient care and taking the time to make sure patients understand their treatment plan. Being a member of the team that implements that care is a strong motivator for me. As a medical assistant, I have been in the position to help a patient learn about their care and understand how to participate in it. While working within an allergy and immunology clinic, a two year old was brought for an oral challenge to test if she was allergic to peanuts. Almost immediately the patient exhibited signs of a reaction and we treated her with epinephrine and an antihistamine. While I was in the patient’s room to observe her, I was speaking with her mom. Her mom was upset and was expressing concern that her daughter was going to have a severely limited life. While unable to relate directly to every case, I had a unique perspective to share since I am also allergic to peanuts. I shared how my mom taught me to read ingredient labels and how each of my teachers stored starburst for the days the class had treats. In moments like this, I have been able to be a crucial part of the patient and patient’s family’s care and experience.

   Working as a medical assistant and spending time shadowing has allowed me to observe this type of thorough care from many providers. What stood out to me during my clinical exposure was my time working with and observing a PA. The PA had the time to sit down with patients and diagnose, treat, and educate. While working at a walkin clinic a large portion of our patients were coming in for their Department of Transportation physicals. A man came in and did his urinalysis in which there was a presence of glucose detected. I immediately showed the PA as I knew this could be a sign of uncontrolled diabetes. The PA sat with him and discussed how dangerous it was to live with uncontrolled diabetes and how important it was to do further health testing and life reform. I assisted the PA in contacting his primary care provider in order to follow up on our findings and ensure he was receiving the necessary care.

   In my interactions with PA’s I have learned that I can carry with me the aspects of being a medical assistant that I enjoy as I pursue a further career in medicine. I do not have to sacrifice teamwork and educating patients in order to gain the ability to treat and diagnose. Just as I moved laterally between specialities as a medical assistant, I can do the same as PA. While I am the one attending school and pursuing a career, it is important for me to consider the impact of my spouse’s military career. The opportunities that PA presents in terms of lateral movement between specialities eases a tension that can come with more frequent life moves. I look forward to growing in clinical experience and knowledge to become and emulate the PA that my sister had as part of her team and as my father needed as his health journey progressed.

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   • Whitney Prosperi says

     August 3, 2023 at 1:03 pm

     Vanessa,
     First, thank you for your family’s service to our country.
     You do a good job revealing your ability to remain calm and connect with people during stressful times. As a parent of someone with a severe allergy, I’m sure you were a comfort to that family. This story, as well as your story about the undiagnosed diabetic patient, shows your ability to focus on the patient and pivot when needed.
     I would elaborate on your shadowing experience. What about shadowing this PA confirmed your decision?
     I would also describe some of the clinical skills and medical knowledge you have gained throughout your different roles.
     Lastly, it is PAs unless you need to use a possessive, at which point it would be PA’s. 🙂
     Should you want more help, remember that we are taking submissions for our essay revision service. I wish you good luck, Vanessa.

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9. Kasey Moskiewicz says

   July 31, 2023 at 12:29 pm

   I have dreamed of working in the healthcare field for as long as I can remember. As an adolescent, I sought out extracurricular opportunities that helped me achieve a strong foundation of leadership, communication, and collaboration. I attended college as a first generation student, and overcame obstacles in academia. I nurtured my dream by gaining experience in the healthcare field as a caregiver and phlebotomist. When I consider my desire to become a physician assistant, it is clear that the most influential aspect has come from my exposure to patient care.

   I discovered the PA profession when I started working as a phlebotomist at a clinic. I was inspired by the autonomy, knowledge, and skill of the physician assistants. This led me to reach out to one of the PAs, and she graciously met with me to discuss the profession and answer my questions. Recently, I observed a physician assistant and experienced what a day in the profession encompasses. I was interested in the range of possibilities within the profession; I was moved by the patient-centered care and teamwork. I want to become a physician assistant because it is a career that promises a challenging environment with opportunities to learn and improve everyday, to practice within a collaborative environment, and to provide exceptional patient care.

   My motivations are a reflection of my experiences within healthcare. I spent a year as a caregiver in the city of Madison, where my sense of compassion and diligence was fostered. It is extremely rewarding to get to know clients intimately and therefore provide a level of care that is right for them and allows as much independence as possible. I worked with clients that required individual and high levels of care, including immobile clients and clients with dementia. One of the biggest difficulties of my position was observing clients’ health deteriorate over time and not being qualified to help where it mattered. Or at least, where I thought it mattered – until I realized the silver lining to being a caregiver. If I could help my clients through difficult times by making each day brighter, even infinitesimally so, then that would be my intent. Facing situations with a positive and loyal attitude can make a big impact on the lives of others. Through this experience, I am prepared and dedicated to having a more direct role in the enrichment of lives.

   I began work as a phlebotomist after I moved back home from my alma mater. My goal was to become more involved in direct care and to gain an increased professional and knowledgeable disposition. Although patient interaction is limited to short exchanges, I still find great joy in communicating with patients and having the ability to ease anxiety over the invasive procedure of venipuncture. Furthermore, working in a fast-paced environment calls attention to the need for effective and efficient communication to ensure patient satisfaction. There are many instances when a patient is not checked in or does not have orders from their doctor. The responsibility falls on us to be observant and take preventative measures — we take note of who has been in the waiting room for too long and we reach out to doctors in advance for missing lab orders. Working in a clinic has contributed to my understanding of patient care as a multifaceted experience and equipped me with the mindset to overcome stressful situations with quick thinking.

   My experiences in healthcare have driven my desire to become more involved in patient care. While I have witnessed the great rewards that come from working in healthcare, I have also seen flaws. One aspect of patient care that should not be overlooked is patient education. Too often, patients come into the lab without understanding why tests are being ordered, or even which tests are being ordered. This can lead to frustration and distrust. Being directly responsible for someone’s health also comes with the responsibility of being an educator. I aspire to be in a position where I have the influence to advocate for patient education so that they are equipped to make choices on behalf of their health according to their preferences.

   I have been taking steps to build a career in healthcare my entire life. My compassion and dedication to the enrichment of lives assures me that the physician assistant career is the right choice for me. Physician assistants are patient-focused and practice within a highly collaborative environment, which is where my capabilities can be utilized to their full capacity. It is my mission to build a career based on values of trust, integrity, and empathy. Becoming a physician assistant will provide me the opportunity to be a provider, a teacher, and a companion to my patients.

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   • Whitney Prosperi says

     August 3, 2023 at 12:51 pm

     Kasey,
     You do a good job explaining what appeals to you about the PA profession.
     You may want to condense where you can so you can include a patient care story that shows you in action as a phlebotomist. Include some details about how you calmed an anxious patient while providing care.
     I would also describe your shadowing experience and how this confirmed your decision to pursue the PA profession.
     Also, describe some other roles you allude to that have prepared you to take this next step. What are some of the clinical skills and medical knowledge you have gained?
     Should you want more help, remember that we are taking submissions for our essay revision service.
     I wish you good luck.

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10. Madison Marzin says

    July 31, 2023 at 8:12 am

    Standing outside of my anatomy and physiology class studying for a quiz on Willis’s circle, I got a call from my father’s wife, an unheard-of occurrence, she had informed me that my father had unexpectedly died. Prior to my birth, my father was a paramedic and through a debilitating accident, he was no longer able to continue this career, though he kept his love for medicine alive. Growing up, my father taught me what he knew and would share stories of his time on the ambulance helping others. This started my passion and amazement for the medical field. In his passing, I knew that I had to continue to pursue my passion, not only to make him proud, but to prove to myself that everything I have worked this hard for has been worth it.

    In high school I was in a college prep program, where we got to tour many kinds of colleges, including a local physician assistant program. I have a distinct memory of walking through the school and thinking “this is where I was meant to be”. When I had the freedom to choose my education in college and where I was employed, I thought of nothing other than medicine. I majored in biochemistry and worked as a medical scribe at the number-one trauma center in the area. Through scribing I was able to work alongside physicians and physician assistants in the emergency department, urgent care, and ICU. This experience further set my passion. There is something so humbling and gratifying about being able to help others when they need it the most. I have never doubted that working in the medical field was meant for me. Since working at the hospital, I was able to scribe for a pain management doctor who eventually trained me to be a medical assistant. Again, this opened a new mind set for me. This doctor eventually became my mentor and helped me to learn to treat each patient the way you would want your mother to be treated. I learned so many different aspects of medicine in this job; from further compassion for others, how insurance works with doctors, and how to run a practice.

    My most recent job in the medical field was working as a medical assistant at a family medicine practice with a group of physician assistants and nurse practitioners. Every day was so rewarding in getting to help people maintain their well-being and treat them when they were not feeling well, even during the pandemic. One physician assistant I worked closely with knew of my aspirations to become a physician assistant, after every visit he would quiz me on what the patient’s diagnosis was and how I would treat it. The PA career is so rewarding that you can help further educate patients and show compassion while working autonomously and collaboratively with a physician to make sure the patient receives the best care.

    I worked to make ends meet during my undergraduate degree, and although my grades during this time were not the best, I believe my experiences in the medical field far outweigh my less than exemplary GPA. In the time since graduating with my bachelors, I returned to school, retook some classes, and completed the necessary classes for PA school that were not included in my degree. I look forward to the opportunity to show that I am a worthwhile investment.

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    • Whitney Prosperi says

      August 3, 2023 at 12:39 pm

      Madison,
      I am sorry for the loss of your father and trust that you will honor his memory as a dedicated and compassionate provider.
      I suggest including details about your different roles and how they have prepared you to take the next step toward a rigorous PA program. What are some clinical skills and medical knowledge you have gained?
      Also, I suggest including a patient care story that shows you in action while connecting on a personal level.
      You are wise to mention your grades and how you improved your GPA. I suggest keeping this discussion to the paragraph before your conclusion and then writing a separate concluding paragraph.
      Also, I would include more details about why the PA role appeals to you.
      In addition, if you have any formal shadowing experience, describe that.
      I wish you good luck, Madison.

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11. McKenna says

    July 27, 2023 at 11:56 am

    In the fall of 2016, my grandma’s heart stopped on the table in the operating room during a heart stent replacement. After five minutes of chest compressions, her doctor was ready to declare a time of death, but the PA on his surgical team insisted on trying a little bit longer, and within two minutes, her heart started beating again. At this point in time, I was already interested in the field of medicine, but the PA, who did not know my grandma and could have followed his superior’s orders, gave us so many more years with her. She is still alive today because of his determination to not let her die on the table. This unprecedented compassion for a stranger is what first peaked my interest in pursuing a career as a physician assistant.

    I have always had an inkling that my calling was to serve others through the field of medicine. I have a strong desire to help individuals and have always found joy in serving others. My second premonition of pursuing PA school was during the summer of 2019, when I was helping my mother through breast cancer. This was a life-changing experience that inevitably determined I was pursuing the right path. I consider my mother to be my best friend, and after watching for months as this beautiful woman I had always looked up to struggled with the most toxic chemotherapy regimen and a double mastectomy, I was determined to one day provide the same level of compassion as her nurses and doctors had shown her. The PA in the oncology department communicated with us frequently and always updated us in a timely manner, as one of the hardest parts of cancer is the waiting game. This small, but simple, mindfulness was one my entire family and I were so grateful for, as it made the journey a little bit easier. This was the first thought I had about pursuing breast cancer research. After graduation, I applied for a master’s in bioengineering, where I conducted breast cancer research alongside my supervisor. Our photodynamic therapy produced successful results at the end of the year, but my experiences have shown me that I am most fulfilled when I am working directly with patients and providing hands-on care.

    After having shadowed many different specialties during my college career, I decided to explore a new field I had always been drawn to and accepted a job as a medical assistant at an OBGYN clinic. This experience has been one of the best decisions I have made and has given me many new perspectives. It has inspired me to be even more open-minded to all fields of medicine. The position of a medical assistant has given me a desire to pursue a career with a wider scope of practice and continue to learn more about the various specialties.

    As a physician assistant, I will have the opportunity to work collaboratively with physicians to diagnose and treat patients. I have developed strong communication skills through my experiences working with diverse patient populations, collaborating with healthcare professionals, and presenting information to patients in a concise manner. I have demonstrated my ability to work effectively as part of a team through my experiences as a medical assistant, where I frequently collaborate with a team of other healthcare professionals to ensure accurate and thorough documentation of patient encounters. I have honed my problem-solving skills through my experiences working in a fast-paced medical environment, where I was required to think critically and adapt quickly to evolving situations in order to provide the best possible care to patients. Lastly, I have demonstrated my ability to adapt to new situations and environments through my experiences working in a variety of clinical settings, including the emergency department and primary care clinics.

    Many moments in my life have led to this decision to pursue PA school; from that first encounter with the PA who never gave up on my grandma to the PA who showed common courtesy during my mother’s breast cancer, I know this is the right path for me. I am excited to be able to work closely with patients and have the opportunity to help them during the most stressful and sometimes the most beautiful periods of their lives. I will also be able to work in a variety of specialties and have the flexibility to change fields throughout my career, allowing for an even broader expansion of knowledge. Now is the perfect time to pursue this career, as I have gained valuable experience as a medical assistant and am ready to pursue the next step in my career. I am thrilled to continue on this path and I am committed to becoming a passionate and knowledgeable physician assistant who provides the best possible care for patients.

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    • Whitney Prosperi says

      July 27, 2023 at 1:59 pm

      McKenna,
      Your opening captures the reader’s attention immediately and reveals your introduction to the PA role. You also do a good job revealing how you arrived on this path.
      I suggest condensing somewhat throughout your essay, so you have room to add in a few more critical elements.
      Include a patient care story that shows you in action providing care of some kind while connecting with a patient on a personal level.
      Also, I would elaborate on some of the clinical skills and medical knowledge you have gained throughout your different roles. You want to show how these jobs have prepared you to enter a rigorous PA program.
      Lastly, if you have any shadowing experience, describe that.
      Should you want more help, remember we are taking submissions for our essay revision service. I wish you good luck, McKenna.

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12. Noah says

    July 26, 2023 at 1:08 pm

    An 18 year old patient presented with right knee pain, and when I, the orthopedic medical assistant, tried my best to take his vitals he squirmed and shouted. Having carefully reviewed his medical history before rooming the patient, I knew to adjust my expectations for the rooming process due to the patient’s autism. Working as an orthopedic MA at OrthoVirginia for two years has increased my exposure to issues far beyond orthopedics. This particular experience is an excellent example of how understanding mental health conditions and patients with special needs only makes a healthcare provider stronger.

    I was diagnosed with Tourette Syndrome (TS), BPD, ADHD, and OCD, in 2006. Since my diagnosis, I’ve experienced the impact of stigma and how it can pose challenges for both the provider and patient. Growing up, I faced inaccurate perceptions that I would be unable to perform tasks at the same level as my peers. To combat this, I sought medical advice from physicians and PAs who suggested the use of medication to manage my symptoms. I didn’t see immediate improvement, so I sought additional professional help through therapy. Using medication and behavioral therapy, I embarked on a journey to defy the stigmatization of TS. Despite lowered expectations from doctors, administrators, and teachers, I excelled both academically and socially, earning Academic Honors across multiple semesters.

    Despite surpassing academic expectations, I still felt ashamed and embarrassed of my disorder. I began suppressing my tics in settings like the classroom, interviews, and work; effectively, I was conforming to the stigma surrounding TS, contradicting my efforts to defy it.

    I feared that my tics would emerge and cast doubt on my abilities, so I chose not to disclose my TS in my interview with OrthoVirginia. While it was evident that I was different from other candidates, my work ethic and eagerness to learn overshadowed any concerns related to my TS. Over the following three months, I performed exceptionally in my job duties, which included applying/removing casts/splints, removing sutures/staples, prepping injections, determining appropriate imaging, and triaging patients. As I excelled and took on responsibilities usually assigned to more experienced employees, I gradually regained confidence in my abilities. This experience reinforced the idea that I should not conform to the stigma of TS, as the quality of my performance proved, through effective symptom management, I can accomplish tasks at the same level as those without TS.

    Over the years, I witnessed how healthcare providers can either positively or negatively affect patients with mental illness. Some exude acceptance, composure, and patience, while others lack compassion and understanding. Successfully navigating these patient interactions goes beyond bedside manner as it requires a commitment to patience, acceptance, and not making false assumptions.

    I am committed to delivering compassionate care to patients with stigmatized conditions as I can empathize with their experiences. Becoming a PA allows me to follow my passion for caring for individuals with mental health conditions and stigmatized disorders by offering longer appointment times and the ability to explore many different healthcare specialties.
    Longer visits with patients drove my aspiration to become a PA as extended face-to-face interaction fosters a more personal atmosphere between provider and patient. This can be invaluable for individuals with stigmatized conditions. I recall a 65-year-old patient who exhibited clear mental and verbal deficits. Extended visits with a PA, facilitated the effective communication necessary to enact an appropriate treatment plan for this patient.

    Intrigued by the versatility of the PA profession, I drew from experiences as an EMT and an MA. Guided by my mentor, Andrew Galbraith PA-C, I have come to appreciate the impact that flexibility in the PA role has on enhancing patient care. Andrew’s method of testing and engaging me in scenario-based learning enabled me to apply knowledge of orthopedics and emergency medicine in situations where both may be applicable. One scenario presented a patient with left shoulder pain, no injury, low BP, high HR, and diaphoresis. Knowing these symptoms were consistent with an MI, I promptly arranged a STAT EKG.

    My experiences with TS, along with my diverse professional background, equips me with essential skills for a future PA. The flexibility of a PA inspires me to apply my expanded medical knowledge across various specialties. Ultimately, overcoming societal stigma and the misconceptions associated with mental health disorders has ingrained in me an unwavering work ethic, a stronger sense of empathy, and an increased self-confidence. This demonstrates that mental health conditions can serve as sources of motivation rather than obstacles while providing me with the tools needed to become an effective and resourceful PA.

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    • Whitney Prosperi says

      July 27, 2023 at 1:47 pm

      Noah,
      Your essay reveals some of the traits that will make you an effective provider, such as grit, empathy, and determination.
      I suggest elaborating on your patient care story somewhat. You may want to add some dialogue here that shows how you calmed the patient while adjusting to his needs.
      Also, if you shadowed Andrew Galbraith, mention that. If you shadowed someone else, provide a description of how that experience confirmed your decision to pursue the PA path.
      Should you want more help, remember that we are taking submissions for our essay revision service. I wish you good luck, Noah.

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13. Maria Isabel Barragan says

    July 23, 2023 at 11:53 am

    Growing up with immigrant parents in the United States presented unique challenges, particularly in navigating the healthcare system. This lack of familiarity created barriers to care. We had no regular doctor, and hospitals seemed confusing. One chilly morning during marching band practice, my toes curled into a painful position and prompted me to go to the Port Chester High School’s school-based health clinic (SBHC). A PA examined me and after bloodwork, I tested positive for Lyme disease. Like most, I used Dr. Google to learn more about it and the PA profession. Since then, if someone got sick at home, I’d quickly look it up. I became the “home nurse” and advocate for my family. But as much as I wanted to help my family, I also wanted to understand it. Meeting the PA ignited my interest in a career I hadn’t heard of before.

    Working in a rehab and nursing care center as a scribe/wound care assistant gave me the chance to observe a PA. She didn’t trail behind a physician. She diagnosed and acted on her own and collaborated with the doctor when necessary. As someone who enjoys autonomy yet also respects supervision, this aspect of the PA profession was appealing. The first time I was ordered to treat a wound, my hands were clammy, and my heartbeat rang in my ears. A feeling I hadn’t felt since my band competitions. I darted to collect the topical benzocaine and silver nitrate sticks and carefully cauterized the patient’s wound. Although a small action, I felt a rush of excitement. I discovered many types of wounds and learned medical terminology, how to write progress notes, and how to communicate effectively with patients. I assisted with unstageable pressure ulcers, post Sx amputations, necrotic wounds, etc. The NP I often worked with trusted me to do my own rounds for simpler wounds and supervised debridement and suture removal.

    Working in healthcare exposed me to a wide range of emotions, as I witnessed the impact of illness on people’s lives. It reinforced the importance of treating patients as individuals with unique life stories and experiences – they’re more than just cases. Some even used to be healthcare workers themselves! Dealing with combative patients and demanding family members taught me valuable lessons in adaptability and empathy. Overtime, wanting more hands-on experience, I took on the role as a clinical medical assistant.

    I was excited and nervous to start my position at the Port Chester High School SBHC. I never imagined I’d be back. It was a big change from my last job. Here, I took vital signs, performed labs/phlebotomy, physical exams, ECGs, and administrative work. One day a teacher escorted a boy into the clinic. Like many of our patients, he was new to the country and uninsured. He had a large gauze taped on his cheek and underneath a wound caused by an at-home botfly larvae removal. Speaking to his guardians, my Spanish fostered trust and they were relieved to know about our free services. We saw this patient for follow-ups, helped him get insurance, and necessary referrals.

    Building rapport with patients became a vital aspect of my work, as I aimed to create a comforting environment during medical procedures. One heartwarming experience involved easing the anxiety of an 8 y.o. boy during a blood draw and making the process much smoother for him and his mother. We did some breathing exercises and I asked him to take his time letting me know when he was ready to begin, which calmed him down. When it was time to retrieve his blood, we engaged in conversation and during the procedure, he didn’t cry or yank his arm away. At the end he sheepishly laughed “It wasn’t that bad!” thwarting a fear of future visits.

    As an MA, I have made great connections with my patients but there are instances where I don’t get to follow up with them. Whether I’m already with another patient, doing lab work, covering another SBHC, etc. Whereas if I were a PA, I’d be involved in their entire healthcare journey. My patients feel relaxed around me and trust me with private information (some involving CPS). Other times, they’ll ask me for medical advice which I do not have the expertise to provide. I’ve enjoyed my past roles, but I’m left feeling I can do more for my patients. Becoming a PA would enable me to provide diagnoses, discuss treatment options, and follow up on their progress consistently.

    As this is my second year applying for a PA program, I have gained more accomplishments. With my SBHC, I was promoted to a lead MA in less than a year of employment. And when I’m not working, I choose to spend my time rediscovering old talents, acquiring a new skill or taking a fun class such as botanical medicine. I enjoy being challenged and as a PA I’d have that lateral mobility to do so. Having worked with diverse populations, I recognize the importance of being an advocate for marginalized groups. I am committed to becoming a PA and ready to embrace the responsibilities and challenges that lie ahead.

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    • Whitney Prosperi says

      July 24, 2023 at 7:43 pm

      Maria,
      You do a great job explaining what about the PA role appeals to you. You also connect the dots to describe how your different jobs have prepared you to take the next step.
      If you have any official shadowing experience, describe how that solidified your decision to pursue the PA profession.
      Also, in your conclusion, you may want to tie back to your introduction in some way.
      I wish you good luck, Maria.

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14. Jaden Mosley says

    July 12, 2023 at 10:52 am

    “We’re smart, we’re focused, we’re Mosley’s”, is what my dad had my sister and I repeat back to him every morning at elementary school drop off. Eventually, we both got to that age where we did not think it was cool anymore, but the chant still lives with me, as do most things from the way I was raised. My parents both spent most of their lives as educators, instilling in me a sense of hard work and compassion for others. I was lucky enough to spend my childhood in a neighborhood full of people with those same values. On the day we moved in 12 years ago, our neighbors from next door to the street over, all helped us unpack after knowing us for only a few minutes. Soon, I was babysitting for the family across the street and carpooling home from school every day with the kid from next door. To me, it was the representation of a true community. Now, in my early adulthood, I seek community like the one I grew up in wherever I go. I have realized how extremely rare it is, and how extremely lucky I am, to have experienced that kind of community at such a formative age. I was raised on the sentiment of loving thy neighbor, and it is that same sentiment that motivates me to pursue a life devoted to healthcare.

    This past Spring, while on a service trip through my university, I was fortunate enough to spend time in a familiarly tight knit community like the one I knew back home. Service has always been an important aspect of my life and was something that my family and I would do together when I was younger. My passion for service continued into high school and it was important to me that I carried it into college as well. During my time on this trip, I met a man called Mr. Mike who operates an organization called Landmark Training Development Company in Orange Mound, Tennessee. Orange Mound is a historic town known for being the first city in the country purchased and planned specifically for Black Americans. Orange Mound, like so many cities around the world, suffers from longstanding structural barriers that limit residents’ access to quality jobs, public transportation, healthcare, and healthy food. Mr. Mike operates an extensive community garden and food pantry to help combat food insecurity. During my time in Orange Mound, I observed a community committed to progress but also to each other.

    I expected to come back from this trip having furthered my journey as an active community member, with lessons learned and good memories. What I ended up leaving with was so much more. I wish I had the time to talk about what meeting Mr. Mike meant to me. To put it simply, I would be lucky if I grew to become even half the kind of community participant and leader that he is to Orange Mound. Another important aspect of my coming back from this trip was my new appreciation and focus on public health as an intrinsic factor of providing healthcare. For me, quality healthcare cannot exist without acknowledging the entire scope of a patient’s life and how they fit into the global health environment. A patient cannot achieve the best possible health outcomes while suffering from food insecurity, for one example out of many. I hope to serve as a provider for those affected by these situations, and to learn how we can work together to lower the barriers that prevent them from receiving quality care. I want to help my patients take back ownership over their health from the circumstances that they do not have control over and are not defined by.

    I am drawn to the physician assistant profession because of the freedom it allows one to provide a high level of care while creating and maintaining personal relationships with their patients. This summer, I shadowed a PA in orthopedics, Mr. Peoples PA-C. Mr. Peoples dynamic with his patients was one of comfort and trust, presumably because of his focus on patient desired outcomes. He effectively explained patients’ treatment options, ensuring that they were knowledgeable about and actively involved in their own care. He demonstrated the knowledge, passion, and open communication that I have come to see as the most valuable attributes of someone working in a field that is dedicated to helping others; similar to the traits I most appreciated about Mr. Mike from Orange Mound. I chose and continue to choose PA as a profession, because it allows me to uphold these standards I have seen in others and have now set for myself. The experiences and choices that I have made during these past few years a have as an undergraduate student all helped me better understand why I want to pursue medicine, but it is because of my recent experiences that I now know how I want to provide medicine. I want to provide patient centered care that focuses on total wellness, in underserved and vulnerable communities. I feel through my career as a PA I will be able to not only find, but help build, the type of community where we continue to love our neighbors.

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    • Whitney Prosperi says

      July 16, 2023 at 7:31 pm

      Jaden,
      You are off to a good start. Your descriptions of Mr. Mike and Mr. Peoples were effective at showing what speaks to you about the PA role.
      I suggest detailing some of the clinical skills and medical knowledge you have gained in your different roles. You want to show how they have prepared you to enter a rigorous PA program.
      Also, I would include a patient care story that shows you in action providing care while also connecting with a patient on a personal level.
      You may need to condense somewhat throughout your essay to make room for these additions.
      Should you want more help, remember we are taking submissions for our essay revision service. I wish you good luck, Jaden.

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15. Noor Huda says

    July 10, 2023 at 3:11 pm

    This was my personal statement when I applied the first time. I will be applying again and I want to know if anything should be changed.

    Thank you.

    Growing up in a traditional Pakistani household, the medical field has always been glorified. Although it was expected that I would enter a healthcare occupation, I did not want to be influenced by culture unless I understood this career choice better. After exploring and taking various science courses, I realized how much I enjoyed learning about the human body. At the start of college, I declared my major in biological sciences and engaged in hands-on experience in healthcare. By working in the medical profession, I became more aware that many communities do not understand science due to cultural and socioeconomic circumstances. Thus they cannot make informed decisions about their health or receive the care they need.
    In my second year of college, I started volunteering for ICNA Relief, an Islamic nonprofit organization that runs a free clinic on the weekends. This clinic allowed me to shadow specialties like Internal Medicine, Cardiology, and Gynecology. Working in different fields taught me how to tend to patients and care for them in compliance with healthcare rules. Most of the patients I worked with were from the same Pakistani background as me. Many of these patients could not afford regular healthcare and lacked the proper knowledge to access care. For instance, a mutual society member was diagnosed with an ongoing heart attack at the free clinic. The most surprising information was that the patient had been experiencing chest pains for some time. While many would seek immediate medical attention, this patient did not understand the symptoms of a heart attack. Countless uninformed Pakistani patients such as this member lack healthcare knowledge and have no idea how to access affordable medical care. This inspired me to work with vulnerable patients, such as the Pakistani community, by providing access to healthcare education.
    Providing health education to different cultural settings motivated me to enter the Physician Assistant (PA) occupation. Working as a PA will provide me with the most face-to-face time with patients and answer all their needs. While trying to gain patient interaction for PA school, I married and moved to Pakistan. While living there, I volunteered at my mother-in-law’s clinic and encountered the same issues that plagued the Pakistani community in the USA. Almost all patients were illiterate about illnesses such as high blood pressure and diabetes and did not know how to advocate for their care. This motivated me further to create an informative environment for my patients. My family eventually returned to the US, and I began to complete my prerequisites to apply for a PA program. In addition to this, I worked as a medical scribe while pregnant. I observed doctors interacting with patients and how to be a healthcare professional. After giving birth, I focused on my daughter and worked toward my goal by receiving my Medical Assistant (MA) certification. Being an MA gave me direct access to patient care, such as obtaining vitals and medication refills. By continuing to thrive as a MA in a Rheumatology clinic, I taught older patients who lacked literacy in critical conditions and treatments.
    In the Rheumatology clinic, I was introduced to two Physician Assistants who gave me valuable confirmation into this profession. Being a Rheumatologist PA means working with the older population by gaining complete insight into the patient’s medical history and then providing the correct evaluation of assessment and plan. While shadowing, I learned most of these skills, including lab order placement, referrals, and specific medication for each disease. These extraordinary PAs inspired me to be an interpretative provider and so much more with intelligence, compassion, rapport, and altruism.
    My unique experience as a volunteer nurse and a Medical Assistant is parallel in many ways to that of a PA. This has prepared me to be successful in this profession to help the American-Pakistani community by presenting information about their most common problems and how to receive solutions. I have developed skills in active listening, patient education, and interpersonal skills that helped guide me to serve my patients and various communities around the nation. My future goal is to become a PA that works with vulnerable elderly patients to provide health education.

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    • Whitney Prosperi says

      July 11, 2023 at 7:25 pm

      Noor,
      You effectively describe what appeals to you about the PA profession.
      Since you have used this essay before, if you are applying to the same schools you may want to change up the introduction a bit. You could even open with the story about the man who was suffering from a heart attack but didn’t know it.
      In addition, you may consider sharing a patient care story that shows you in action providing clinical care of some kind while connecting with a patient on a personal level. You may need to condense some throughout to make room for this.
      I wish you good luck, Noor.

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16. Grace says

    July 10, 2023 at 7:17 am

    When I was 12 years old, I read a book that changed me. It was a gift from my English teacher. As a kid, I loved reading more than any other activity. What fascinated me the most was the transformational story of a young boy. I learned that in life anything is possible through hard work and dedication. Up to this point, I had never given much thought to what I wanted to be when I grew up until I read this book. The title of the book was “Gifted Hands” by Dr Ben Carson.
    Growing up in a village where healthcare was so scarce and often perceived as a privilege, the only association people had with hospitals was death. The affordability of healthcare was a major contributor to why people sought medical help when the illness became unbearable. Even though most of their ailments could have been treated if they had seen a physician at the onset of their symptoms, nothing could be done for them.
    After high school, I got accepted to attend college abroad and when I was there, I began struggling with the career choice I had made. I chose to leave school and try to find what I was enthusiastic about. This led me to move to the Caribbean Island of St Kitts and Nevis. To pay for my upkeep, I began working as a caretaker for the elderly. While transporting to the health center on the Island, I interacted with some medical students. Through these interactions, I started to remember the sense of purpose I felt when I read about medicine when I was 12 years old, and I knew what I wanted to do was practice medicine.
    In pursuit of this dream, I moved to the United States, because it offered the best opportunities. I began researching diverse ways to get involved in healthcare and that is when I became a certified nurse assistant. While working on a solid organ transplant floor, there was one patient that left the greatest impression on me. I was taking care of a 40-something-old female and at the end of my shift, I had not recorded any urine output for her. Our patient population included those with renal failure, and we were required to document intake and output for each patient. Wanting to make sure that she had not voided and dumped the urine without me knowing, I went into her room. Sorry to wake you, Miss Goodridge, but I haven’t recorded any urine for you all night, did you void at all? She replied, “Honey I don’t pee.” What saddened me the most was the fact she had the biggest smile I had ever seen. It was easy to say okay and leave the room, but I asked her if she was comfortable talking about it. Without hesitation, she detailed her failing health due to Lupus and how she has learned to live with the disease. This encounter gave me the courage to begin having conversations with my patients and not be in a hurry to leave the room.
    While working on the transplant unit I got to learn about the physician assistant profession. Not fully understanding what a PA does, I talked with Steve, the only PA I knew who worked on our unit during the night shift. Steve would see patients as they were admitted for their pre-transplant work-up. He was kind enough to allow me to sit in on one of his consultations. One of the things that stood out was the way he would pull a chair and sit in front of his patients as if telling them, “Take your time, ask all the questions you have because I’m not in a harry, I’m here to take care of you.” While listening as he educated the patients and their families about what to expect during and after their operation, I found myself comforted by his mannerism as if I was part of that family. Watching him have that kind of patience while addressing all the emotionally fueled questions made me want to be that kind of PA.
    Wanting to get more exposure to a PA role, I began working at a trauma/surgical ICU. It is here I began my shadowing where I got to witness the collaboration teamwork between physicians and physician assistants—always working as a team to improve the health of their patients. During my shadowing as a trauma PA, we responded to trauma in the emergency room. We got there before the patient and watching all the team members prepare for the patient’s arrival looked like something that had been rehearsed. When the patient arrived, everyone sprang into action. Something was awe-inducing as I watched the team examine the patient and communicate their findings to each other. I witnessed the level of trust between the physicians and the PAs.
    Going to school full-time to fulfill my prerequisite for PA school and working full-time was the most challenging thing I have ever done. My motivation to keep going came from a 12-year-old girl who had read a book and began to believe that if that boy could do it so could she. The difference between then and now was that now I knew without a doubt what career I wanted to make my lifelong passion. Being a PA is a dream I never knew existed, but I am so grateful to have found it.

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    • Whitney Prosperi says

      July 11, 2023 at 7:13 pm

      Grace,
      Your heart to help patients shines throughout your essay, and I trust that you will be an exceptional provider one day.
      In addition, you do a good job revealing what appeals to you about the PA profession. I especially liked your description of Steve.
      I suggest elaborating on any clinical skills and medical knowledge you have picked up through your different roles. You want to show how these jobs have prepared you to take the next step.
      Should you want more help, remember that we are taking submissions for our essay revision service.
      I wish you good luck, Grace.

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17. Tyler says

    July 6, 2023 at 11:22 am

    Dirt kicks up from a caravan of rickshaws carrying me and my two brothers. Through chalky clouds, I make out thin silhouettes. As we travel closer hazy figures transform into poverty-stricken communities living on the roads of rural China. I am in Guangdong, visiting the province that housed my ancestors for centuries. Exposed to poverty and the inequalities that follow its shadow, I wonder if this could have been me and my community had my great grandparents never left the Mainland. I feel powerless as an observer unable to offer any aid. Maybe it’s an understandable response for a nine-year-old to helplessly stare; however, I feel ashamed that I couldn’t help change their outcome. My first formative experience toward my career in healthcare was a vow to never be just a bystander.

    I was formally introduced into the world of healthcare by Dr. Otoupalik, a chiropractor who taught a sports medicine elective at my high school. From day one he encouraged a “learn by doing” approach where a poorly taped ankle or an incorrect treatment plan was not a failure but a learning opportunity. Chasing this new intrigue, I began volunteering at physical therapy clinics and shadowing athletic trainers. By the end of high school I understood that providing care was the answer to that vow I made to myself years earlier.

    My next step towards healthcare brought me to my university’s athletic department which took team-based care to the next level. I found myself in meetings discussing performance data to the coaching staff, sports medicine team, and athletes. These interactions fostered my appreciation for the multifaceted approach to health and wellness. Adopting our culture of owning your mistakes and growing from criticism led to my realization that the success of the team was dependent on everyones’ commitment and support of one another.

    Ready to explore new opportunities, I began caring for at-risk youth at Jasper Mountain, a behavioral treatment home. My eyes were opened to the chaos physical and emotional trauma can cause. Initially, I felt trapped and nervous discussing neglect and abuse to children. After investing hours reviewing their past medical and family history I soon realized they were no strangers to the topic. I started to approach these stressful situations with patience and honesty which not only helped build trust in my relationships but improved my own confidence. My duty as a caregiver deepened values in compassion and taught me the value of support systems in celebrating achievements and navigating interpersonal conflict. The teary hugs I shared with a child rejoining their family filled me with overwhelming pride, as I knew I was upholding my vow by helping change their outcome.

    My interest to provide quality care was born from an urge to reduce health disparities. Yet my conviction that a career as a PA would be most rewarding did not originate in an epiphany, but rather incremental experiences that culminated as a medical assistant at a family medicine clinic.

    As a Federally Qualified Health Center, I provided resources and support for houseless, uninsured, and non-English speaking communities. This work not only challenged my academic and technical skills but also tested my social and emotional limits. Caring for patients that have been let down and overlooked by the system requires a greater level of patience and empathy. The pandemic granted me invaluable experience working alongside PAs as we took steps to limit exposure and preserve PPE. During visits, I scribed patient medical history, and respiratory assessment findings, and called in prescriptions. Listening to the PA diagnose health problems and develop treatment plans displayed their adept level of training. I admired the air of assertiveness they exhibited when communicating with staff and patients in a way that commanded attention while still comfortably putting everyone at ease. Acquiring experience across specialties speaks to the depth of knowledge a PA can pull from and their ability to effectively collaborate within various healthcare teams. I am lucky to understand that these adopted skills have heightened my own maturity.

    Life has taken me many adventures, and it is only by looking back now that I can connect the dots all the way back to that dirt road long ago. Encouraged by progress and learning by doing, I finally have found a role within medicine that to me is both exhilarating and daunting, but fulfilling nevertheless. I can now make a new promise to use my knowledge to push myself and the profession forward to address the health disparities that separate communities from the privileges of basic healthcare.

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    • Whitney Prosperi says

      July 9, 2023 at 3:07 pm

      Tyler,
      Your opening does a great job of grabbing the reader’s attention and explaining your desire to make a difference for patients.
      I suggest including a paragraph that describes any shadowing of PAs that you may have had. What about these interactions solidified your decision to pursue this path?
      Also, elaborate on any other medical knowledge or clinical skills you have gained that will prepare you to take the next step.
      Should you want more help, remember that we are taking submissions for our essay revision service.
      I wish you good luck, Tyler!

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18. Allison says

    July 5, 2023 at 9:01 pm

    As a young child growing up in a small town in southeastern Wyoming, my mother did what most moms would do when they were annoyed with their kids; she told me to go outside. While this worked out in her favor most of the time, the fateful day I hurt my ankle chasing my older brother was not one of them. After much screaming and crying on my end, my mother got me up, into the car, and on the way to the clinic in town. Unfortunately for us, it was Sunday, meaning the clinic was closed, and we would have to drive 45 minutes to the nearest hospital to get my ankle looked at. While this may have seemed insignificant at the moment, it was the first time I ever wondered why it was so hard for my family to get the healthcare we needed.
    Over time, I noticed how limited our resources were in our town. While our clinic was sufficient for simple check-ups and sports physicals, we had to travel for most other procedures. X-rays, MRIs, and certain vaccinations required road trips to the next town. More severe injuries could mean being transported to Colorado since the local hospital was limited in staff and supplies. Some of my classmates couldn’t afford to go to doctors’ appointments because the cost of travel on top of the visit would be too expensive. Even when my family moved to Idaho when I was in high school, I was baffled by the obstacles people faced just to be able to get into a clinic. Reflecting on my life experiences, I contemplated why it had been such a challenge to access adequate care for myself and my community. After careful consideration, I realized that our area lacked sufficient healthcare providers to meet our needs. This led me to consider the possibility of working in healthcare myself.
    In college, I discovered my love for science and research. Over the last year, I was extremely fortunate to continue that passion as a clinical research assistant/data manager, helping run hematology and oncology clinical trials. Throughout this time, I learned valuable information about phase I-III trials. I gained a vast knowledge of the mutations, side effects, and treatments surrounding lung cancer. I was utterly submersed in an incredibly supportive environment, where I could shadow my principal investigators and ask the nurse practitioners endless questions on how to move forward with a patient care plan. During the research visits, I interacted with the patients alongside the lead coordinator to help provide lighthearted conversation and support. As I worked more throughout the clinic, I found fulfillment in knowing that I was making a positive impact on patient’s lives through my efforts, only solidifying my desire to continue to help others through the role of healthcare.
    With a career as a PA, I would have the opportunity to be a compassionate advocate for my patients during vulnerable times. Serving as a trusted guide and providing the highest standard of care possible would be the deepest of honors. The dynamic nature of the profession, where every day is a new challenge, captivates me. The variety of responsibilities, whether prescribing treatments or assisting in surgeries, is exciting. In addition, the collaborative environment of clinics where I could work with other healthcare professionals is vital, allowing for the best comprehensive care possible. As a PA, I would also be able to achieve my lifelong goal of providing care to rural and medically underserved areas so I can help give other families a different experience than I had growing up.
    Becoming a PA is not just a career choice for me; it is a pursuit that will allow me to use my personal experiences, aspirations, and values to better society. I am determined to provide compassion and kindness for patients to have a holistic healthcare experience and be a role model for others in the future. There is no other profession that would give me the same sense of purpose and value as a PA, and I am so excited to start my journey dedicating myself to making a meaningful difference in the lives of others.

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    • Whitney Prosperi says

      July 9, 2023 at 2:48 pm

      Allison,
      You do a good job explaining what aspects of the PA profession appeal to you.
      I would include some more details about any clinical skills gained throughout your different roles. You want to show how these jobs have prepared you to step into a rigorous PA program.
      Also, if you have any shadowing of PAs, I would describe that. Was there an interaction between PA/patient or PA/supervising physician that solidified your decision?
      Should you want more help, remember that we are taking submissions for our essay revision service. I wish you good luck, Allison.

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19. Leah says

    July 4, 2023 at 1:33 pm

    My heart raced as I pressed the button for level two at the Dana Farber Cancer Institute two years ago. It was my first day shadowing a physician specializing in prostate cancer. With my notepad and pen in hand, my last expectation was to leave my first day striving to become a physician assistant. After experiencing the meaningful day-to-day life of an oncology physician during my first two hours, his P.A. let me observe her while he attended a private meeting with colleagues. For the next 75 minutes, I observed the P.A. as she described the gold nanoparticle use in treatment to a panicking patient who had just been diagnosed with prostate cancer. As she drew diagrams and answered his questions I observed her show empathy and compassion while also being optimistic, and how it hastily affected the patient’s mood. As my time with the P.A. ended, I was immediately inspired by her and scribbled, “RESEARCH P.A. PROFESSION.” at the top of my page.
    Despite not knowing many of the differences between a physician and a physician assistant, this impromptu experience almost confirmed that I wanted to change my field of study from pre-medicine to pre-physician assistant and biology. Shortly after my shadowing, I began working as an EMT and later a medical assistant (M.A.) in a family medicine office. My time with the P.A.s in family medicine made me realize I strive to use medicine to not just prolong life, but to also form meaningful connections with patients, as individuals have some of their most uncomfortable and vulnerable moments when consulting with medical professionals. As a biology laboratory teaching assistant while achieving my undergraduate degree, I discovered my own passion for education in relation to clinical medicine. Helping students of various educational backgrounds and levels of understanding with experiments made me aware that I have to be flexible with my teaching approach. Similarly, witnessing P.A.s treat patients of all ages, varying backgrounds, and knowledge of medicine in primary care has given me insight to how individuals understand and process information differently, which will affect the methods I deliver clinical instructions as a P.A. My experience has shown me that as a P.A, I can combine my passions through both teaching and treating patients.
    Although nurse practitioners and physicians also share a passion for medicine and treating patients, I wish to become a P.A. specifically because I want to be trained as a generalist that can transition through different specialties without recertification. My plans for the future and where I want to settle in the medical field have always been undefined, but knowing being a P.A. could allow me to shift between specialties and work with a diverse group of patients and different medical cases.
    An impactful moment that solidified my passion for becoming a P.A. was during the transporting of a 16-year-old girl following a recent suicide attempt during a section-12 ambulance call. New to the United States without any family and unable to speak any English, she only barely managed to utter how her peluche (a teddy bear she was gripping) was a gift from her father before she left Mexico and was the only thing that could provide her comfort. She was stricken with fear as I took her vitals and addressed a laceration on her forehead. Recalling how I had seen the P.A. engage and calm the patient with life-threatening prostate cancer, I made an effort not to just address her wounds, but also to ensure she felt safe during her trip to the hospital. In the five minutes we spoke about her stuffed animal, she was able to relax and her heart rate decreased from 113 to 68 BPM. In the years since, I have been unable to forget that ambulance ride. That one evening, in addition to my shadowing allowed me to witness firsthand the effects compassion, closeness and optimism can have on a struggling patient. Such qualities, along with a focus on educating the patient, can be best found in a P.A.
    As I continue to work as a medical assistant, I strive daily to make someone be put at ease by having personal conversations to ease their white coat hypertension or any anxiety regarding their health care. I aim to use medicine to prolong life and expand medical literacy so people can feel more comfortable receiving medical care, and so another child in danger can continue to hold their peluche. Having alone time with patients, whether during a section-12 psychiatric transport in the back of an ambulance or spending 15 minutes with a patient as an M.A., has broadened my perspective and deepened my compassion for those in need. I want to contribute to easing peoples’ anxieties and expanding health literacy among patients. As a physician assistant rather than a physician, I can mobilize throughout the medical field and focus more on educating a variety of patients in different specialties to improve informed delivery of care.

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    • Whitney Prosperi says

      July 5, 2023 at 6:45 pm

      Leah,
      Your essay reveals your desire to forge a connection with patients.
      I suggest condensing where you can so you can add more details about clinical skills and medical knowledge gained in your different roles.
      I would eliminate the comments about NPs as you may not want to waste the characters discussing a career you don’t want to pursue.
      One note: PA and MA do not require periods. 🙂
      Should you want more help, remember that we are taking submissions for our essay revision service. I wish you good luck, Leah!

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20. Kristal Torres says

    July 3, 2023 at 12:35 pm

    Each step I took from the car parking lot to the doors of the ER felt like an eternity, any attempt to suck in a breath of fresh air left me more exhausted than my last. At around age 9, I was diagnosed with pneumonia that eventually caused me to suffer an asthma attack. The only encounter that I can recall to this day was with my nighttime nurse. He thoughtfully took the time to explain to us about the use of bronchodilators and how it would widen my bronchioles to allow for more air to pass through so that I could breath with more ease. He spoke Spanish when addressing my mom in a respectable way that Hispanic elders are often comforted by. “Muy amable” is a phrase my mom used which translates to “very kind of you”, after he explained the instructions of how and when to use my albuterol rescue inhaler. Seeing someone with brown skin and brown eyes like mine, represented in healthcare, created space for my mom and I to have a voice. I was provided with answers and education in a way that helped me make sense of what was happening within my body which sparked my curiosity in medicine. Although it was because of my chronic illness that first exposed me to healthcare, it was the culturally competent care from a thoughtful nurse that eventually led me to aspire to become a great leader as a healthcar provider.
    Years later, my draw to a profession within healthcare evolved into an aspiration for a Physician Assistant as a college student engaged by like minded colleagues like myself with similar passions for the medical field. My interest in becoming a Physician Assistant only strengthened while working as medical assistant and scribe for a team of doctors who focused on pain management for chronic and acute illnesses. After countless scribed medical charts I eventually learned the physiology behind the conditions we treated such as observing the source of pain and taking into account the nerve roots that could be clinically indicated based on the patients signs and symptoms. I engaged with each patient during and after their appointment to provide reassurance to manage their diagnosis. It is too common for patients’ to feel lost and unsure of what steps to take moving forward in their treatment plan, which is where I loved to step in to educate them as a team effort to provide guidance. An example of this is when I created an informational consent packet for procedures such as a lumbar epidural steroid injection that provided an anatomical diagram of the lumbar spine in relation to the corresponding treatment. To be a point of guidance and reference was such a privilege that I took advantage as it mirrored the care and education I recieved during my experience as a scared 9 year old girl.
    In 2021, I eventually obtained a job as an emergency room technician where I practiced direct patient care in a variety of cases reflective of the community I served. The hospital is one that lies in a low income, medically disadvantaged neighborhood where the impact of gang violence and drug abuse is something often seen in the Emergency Department. A situation where I had the privilege to work collaboratively with a PA for a life saving effort was with a victim of assault due to gang violence. The assault on the patient occurred minutes outside the hospital where he suffered numerous facial lacerations some of which seemed to be arterial due to the profuse bleeding.
    After much discussion from the head doctor on the floor, it was decided that the PA take over the patient case. I was asked to be the assistant by the PA for the entire suturing procedure given my numerous past encounters I assisted with her prior to this. I seen this as an opportunity to allow me to actively exercise my purpose in helping someone within my capacity and provide a source of comfort for vulnerable patient in such a scared state. I can recall blotting away the blood dripping down his eyes, and holding his cold hand, as he lay awake during the procedure where he sustained several facial stitches. The way the PA worked quickly to reduce blood loss as best she could for the patient left him full of gratitude afterwards. This demonstrated how impactful a Physician Assistant is when fulfilling a leadership role within a team that I took part of. In addition, this shed light to the autonomy that is performed to provide competent care for people within a community such as this.
    In summary, my desire to serve people reflects what I needed during vulnerable moments of my life which is why I choose to fulfill my purpose in serving others in an inclusive affirming approach as a Physician Assistant. It is my diligence, compassion, and curiosity that will lead me to continue to grow into an invaluable healthcare worker. I am confident with my willingness and strong interest to persevere in this profession, I have the potential to provide leadership reflective of the communities I will serve. I will be the PA working in a low-income clinic, breaking down cultural and language barriers by providing medical education in their language. I will be a leader and an inspiration to the next generation of Latina Physician Assistants.

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    • Whitney Prosperi says

      July 5, 2023 at 3:56 pm

      Kristal,
      Your essay spotlights your desire to elevate and assist patients. It also effectively explains what appeals to you about the PA profession.
      In your story about the suturing, you reveal some of the qualities that will make you an effective PA. You may even want to add a sentence that describes comforting words you may have said to the patient during the procedure.
      Also, if you have any shadowing experience, describe that and how it solidified your decision.
      I would eliminate the words “In summary” as you don’t really need them here. Also, physician assistant doesn’t need to be capitlized unless it is beginning a sentence. 🙂
      I wish you good luck, Kristal!

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